Natures Ball Gown
a contest entry21 total reviews
Comment from Dick Waters
Gorgeous!
And words that add a poetic touch.
You obviously have a way with words.
There's many things in nature that man can't create, maybe a woman could.
Good luck in the contest!
Dick
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Gorgeous!
And words that add a poetic touch.
You obviously have a way with words.
There's many things in nature that man can't create, maybe a woman could.
Good luck in the contest!
Dick
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Hi, Dick. I am thrilled you like my poem so much. Many thanks for your best wishes.
Comment from palmart
Your comparison between nature and a Ball gawn is creative! You spark colours around and invite to read. Nice picture and the white frame evokes the cold November you describe in your writing. Good job!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Your comparison between nature and a Ball gawn is creative! You spark colours around and invite to read. Nice picture and the white frame evokes the cold November you describe in your writing. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I am delighted you found my analogy creative. Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
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You`re very welcome, Writer!!
Have a great week!!
Blessings!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved your description of Autumn teetering on the edge of winter here as we move into November and the air cools, I felt I was watching a nature cat-walk show, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I loved your description of Autumn teetering on the edge of winter here as we move into November and the air cools, I felt I was watching a nature cat-walk show, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well and covered more than two colors. The presentation is beautiful.
I love the Autumn colors and imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well and covered more than two colors. The presentation is beautiful.
I love the Autumn colors and imagery.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Gypsy, for your lovely review of my poem.
Comment from Ben B.
In the title I think you meant to say "Nature's Ball Gown" rather than just "Nature." The poem itself is great and I agree, snow does make the outdoors look beautiful.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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In the title I think you meant to say "Nature's Ball Gown" rather than just "Nature." The poem itself is great and I agree, snow does make the outdoors look beautiful.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Ben, for your kind praise of my poem. You are correct about what I meant to say, but the site (at least for me) does not accept an apostrophe in the title, the description line, or the author?s notes.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery that your poem creates in my mind eye. The word choices are perfect. This flows very easily. Great job with your poem.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery that your poem creates in my mind eye. The word choices are perfect. This flows very easily. Great job with your poem.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Michael, for your high praise of my poem. I am delighted the imagery is easy to visualize.
Comment from equestrik
I really enjoyed this presentation for the 'Short and Colorful' writing prompt. Your picture choice is a perfect compliment to your writing. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I really enjoyed this presentation for the 'Short and Colorful' writing prompt. Your picture choice is a perfect compliment to your writing. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I am delighted you enjoyed my personification of Nature in her ball gown. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and elegant--fresh and whimsical--this may well be a winner--I'll be checking he results and will be pissed if I don't see this one! Delightfully clever!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Lovely and elegant--fresh and whimsical--this may well be a winner--I'll be checking he results and will be pissed if I don't see this one! Delightfully clever!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I am so pleased you found my short poem ?fresh and whimsical.? Many thanks for your encouraging review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You have written a
very good poem for
the contest.
-Excellent use of colors,
and vivid images that
paint a word picture of November:
"The silver frost brocade."
-The use of flowers is also
very good: "...a pinned corsage."
-A very strong entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You have written a
very good poem for
the contest.
-Excellent use of colors,
and vivid images that
paint a word picture of November:
"The silver frost brocade."
-The use of flowers is also
very good: "...a pinned corsage."
-A very strong entry; good luck!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Hi Pam. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I am so pleased you liked the imagery.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
Well, you have several colors in your entry. I love the colors of fall. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Well, you have several colors in your entry. I love the colors of fall. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Many thanks for reviewing my short poem. I am delighted I could share the colors of fall with you.
