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Well, I'll be Dern!

(a Covid dream)

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Great entry for the
Not funny but funny writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny and true for many people. I don't wear make up so it's all the same to me. I don't mind wearing a mask.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    You don't? That's amazing. I hate the constricted feeling.
    I did think the cartoon of the bank robber standing in line wearing a mask, like everybody else, was pretty funny. We need a little humor these days. Thanks for reading.
Comment from sammielwf
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Mystery Author,
Your poem is a rather interesting take on covid and mask wearing. In a sense your poem takes on the necessity of wearing a mask which does allow a person to cover a myriad of secrets. I wonder how many people would agree with your assessment.
Interesting topic to choose.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    dear Burger, burger, yes you said burger. :)
    I don't really care if people agree, it is just a tongue in cheek piece, trying to add a bit of humor to this damn pandemic.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by sammielwf on 26-Oct-2020
    I am not sure where Burger Burger cam from? I am as confused as you. Unless I screwed up and added a comment from another review an inadvertently attached it to yours in my mind somehow. I apologize for that gaffe.
    I did enjoy your piece very much- it made me laugh in places and be reflective in places too.
    Sammielwf (who has a masked red faced right now)
Comment from equestrik
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This is a creative and clever write with a good photo to go with and accentuate the writing. i also think it is a good entry for the 'Funny, Not Funny" poetry contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    thank you. I am planning a mask burning party where we will dance around the fire like witches ( with half faces)
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Oh no! I have to wear those awful masks for at least eight hours a day. I hope my face won't disappear! The zits are bad enough. Now I'm imagining them eating my face. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    Bless your heart. 8 hrs a day. Do you make up half a face? just kidding. Thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wry humor on an apt topic-- priceless punchline -- it will be weird if/when we don't have to wear masks--as for me, I wear makeup sans mask; alas, nobody sees me at a social distance. Fun poem--good luck. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    I really do, too. Have occasionally gone without but was mostly just having fun.
    Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaa, this is funny author. But you just never know what is going to happen when you get used to wearing a mask.

I agree with you too. I wear one even though they aren't exactly the most pleasant thing.

I hope that nightmare never comes true, but I do with you great luck in the voting booth. :)

Gloria

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    thanks Gloria. I was mostly kidding, playing with an idea. thanks for reading and your good wishes.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Very well written prose about wearing the mask and being free from makeup.
The rhyming was good in telling your tale.
The ending was funny, as we all have been wearing masks for so long, the dream is almost real.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

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 Comment Written 25-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
    thanks, Mary. Your comments are much appreciated!