Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 91 "Misty Morning"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Beautiful imagery both with and without your picture... you inspired me such that I had to write the next chapter!! ;) :) Thanx for the uplift today, my lady -- so very welcome with these gray and drizzling skies!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Beautiful imagery both with and without your picture... you inspired me such that I had to write the next chapter!! ;) :) Thanx for the uplift today, my lady -- so very welcome with these gray and drizzling skies!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So happy you are adding to the book. It is fun to see where the next chapter goes. Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written addition to the multi-author Renga book. Your couplet show the joy of some deer frollicking after the rain shower nearby the rainbow in the sky.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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A very well-written addition to the multi-author Renga book. Your couplet show the joy of some deer frollicking after the rain shower nearby the rainbow in the sky.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this addition to the book of Renga.
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh so nice, June. I can totally relate the location and the mist and the deer. An excellent continuation of this most interesting story.
Always a pleasure to read and review your work.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Oh so nice, June. I can totally relate the location and the mist and the deer. An excellent continuation of this most interesting story.
Always a pleasure to read and review your work.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this addition to the book. A little piece of paradise.
Comment from Sugarray77
An enjoyable read, June. I love the artwork and how it is reflected in the words you chose for your Renga chapter. Very simple, yet effective. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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An enjoyable read, June. I love the artwork and how it is reflected in the words you chose for your Renga chapter. Very simple, yet effective. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this addition to the Renga book!
Comment from Joan E.
What a gorgeous artwork and words to match in your 7-7 couplet! Even without the picture I could visualize the scene. Thank you for adding to the Renga book. More cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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What a gorgeous artwork and words to match in your 7-7 couplet! Even without the picture I could visualize the scene. Thank you for adding to the Renga book. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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I?m glad you enjoyed this addition to the Renga book.
Comment from Eternal Muse
June, this was absolutely gorgeous, and I am so glad it is Sunday and I have sixes.
Amazing imagery that haunts and stays with the reader. An award winning artwork. I love those deers! The whole thing has this dreamy fairytale quality, and you want to submerge there a little longer.
Two lines that spell volumes.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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June, this was absolutely gorgeous, and I am so glad it is Sunday and I have sixes.
Amazing imagery that haunts and stays with the reader. An award winning artwork. I love those deers! The whole thing has this dreamy fairytale quality, and you want to submerge there a little longer.
Two lines that spell volumes.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouraging feedback and generous rating!
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It was an amazing poem. You got my vote!
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Oh, I am sorry, I just realized it was not for a contest. But I love it.
Comment from Cindy Decker
June, this is a nice couplet, and this picture could be a reproduction of nature in my town.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest, June,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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June, this is a nice couplet, and this picture could be a reproduction of nature in my town.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest, June,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Glad you could relate to this couplet. Sounds like you live in a beautiful area!
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I really do, except for winter,
when the weather plummets to ?13 degrees//and an actual temperature, not wind chill.
Have a nice week, June.👻🎃
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Misty Morning
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Beautiful chapter for the renga book. We are almost done with this book but I will start a new one. Your couplet fits in nicely with the previous 5/7/5 poem. Excellent presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Misty Morning
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Beautiful chapter for the renga book. We are almost done with this book but I will start a new one. Your couplet fits in nicely with the previous 5/7/5 poem. Excellent presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Well done!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Glad you like this addition to the book. Looking foward to your beginning a new one!
Comment from royowen
A lovely addition to the 5/7/5 in this renga series June, the onset of a rainbow in the morning must be something to see, particularly after being misr. A beautifully written Renga, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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A lovely addition to the 5/7/5 in this renga series June, the onset of a rainbow in the morning must be something to see, particularly after being misr. A beautifully written Renga, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this couplet. Always nice to hear from you.
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Well done
Comment from Mark D. R.
Janet,
Great use of the artwork to reinforce your 7-7 verse for this collaborative effort. We are lifted in spirit in reading this entry. Hopefully, the next 5-7-5 will be as expressive. I too like to use the poetic contractions for beneath, ever, and never. Often they give a more poetic ring to our words IMHO (-:
Here is my fun alternative to your first line:
Night mist cleanses (or colors) the valley - 'colors' get linked to your rainbow image (-:
Mark
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Janet,
Great use of the artwork to reinforce your 7-7 verse for this collaborative effort. We are lifted in spirit in reading this entry. Hopefully, the next 5-7-5 will be as expressive. I too like to use the poetic contractions for beneath, ever, and never. Often they give a more poetic ring to our words IMHO (-:
Here is my fun alternative to your first line:
Night mist cleanses (or colors) the valley - 'colors' get linked to your rainbow image (-:
Mark
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thanks for dropping by to read and share your insights. I had to link my addition to Gypsy's previous entry - a cold mountain scene at night. I wanted to contrast it with a warm misty valley at dawn. The rainbow was just the cherry on top...lol