Me Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 132 "Happy Birthday to Me?"My Self Biograpy
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Comment from Lulube
So, old man. Hope you got a cake or a piece of cake or you will go today and buy yourself a small, okay large, b-day cake? I'm glad you got the better memories flowing in this write. but you don't have to wait until your b-day to allow your thoughts to get there eh? So you are 4.5 months older than I am. We've put in a gruesome collection of trauma and adventure between us and we are still here. We may have a more troublesome decline than what we could have had, but we must face facts, WE BROUGHT IT ON OURSELVES. Sucks to know that we made some bad choices, maybe too care free to care, but we are still here. We only have this one round from beginning to end to find ourselves without any more struggles. So here's to your b-day, another year of survival and still looking at yourself with the desire to succeed, to overcome. You are not a quitter.
lulube HAPPY BELATED GO GET THAT CAKE, EVEN IF YOU HAD SOME
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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So, old man. Hope you got a cake or a piece of cake or you will go today and buy yourself a small, okay large, b-day cake? I'm glad you got the better memories flowing in this write. but you don't have to wait until your b-day to allow your thoughts to get there eh? So you are 4.5 months older than I am. We've put in a gruesome collection of trauma and adventure between us and we are still here. We may have a more troublesome decline than what we could have had, but we must face facts, WE BROUGHT IT ON OURSELVES. Sucks to know that we made some bad choices, maybe too care free to care, but we are still here. We only have this one round from beginning to end to find ourselves without any more struggles. So here's to your b-day, another year of survival and still looking at yourself with the desire to succeed, to overcome. You are not a quitter.
lulube HAPPY BELATED GO GET THAT CAKE, EVEN IF YOU HAD SOME
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Well at first my thoughts on poetry?
That it was for women and sissies.
That was as a teenager
Now still as a teenager, I learned a little bit more about it.
And, I use it basically as a tool.
Yes, for grieving and also to entertain.
And, also for possible future money.
Tee, He, He!
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I'm with you there on the possible money, there's not too much that I can put this amount of time into as I do in writing, except........ but that was a long time ago. lol
lulube
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was great. It put a smile on my face. I love the way you share your discomfort/disbelieve whatever you want to call it with your age. This was funny - enjoyable and well written.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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This was great. It put a smile on my face. I love the way you share your discomfort/disbelieve whatever you want to call it with your age. This was funny - enjoyable and well written.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thanks for the Sixer Michael.
I really appreciate it.
Ricky
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This has the tone of a prayer and a life review. I think you did a good job with the number section, as people don't really consider all of the days which add up to make a human life. Interesting simile comparing the weeks slipping by as if they were parts of an engine lubricated with 'Mobile One motor oil' there. Often we get to points in the road where it seems we have only had a peek at life.
Little fixes:
792 longs months
only Son, and then my only wife
I think you can un-capitalize Son to son
I'm not sure I understood the punctuation in the last sentence.
take off the s after long
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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This has the tone of a prayer and a life review. I think you did a good job with the number section, as people don't really consider all of the days which add up to make a human life. Interesting simile comparing the weeks slipping by as if they were parts of an engine lubricated with 'Mobile One motor oil' there. Often we get to points in the road where it seems we have only had a peek at life.
Little fixes:
792 longs months
only Son, and then my only wife
I think you can un-capitalize Son to son
I'm not sure I understood the punctuation in the last sentence.
take off the s after long
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you dear I corrected the plural issue what you perhaps reviewed it before I can get finished with it because you didn't get a chance to read the editors notes I believe.
I just when it comes to the use of capitalizations on words such as son I feel that I use that to emphasize things that are important to me or people or places.
Thanks again.
Doctor Ricky 1024
