Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "Icy Cold Water"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
9 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding your 5-7-5 to the Renga book. It describes the picture and follows Ulla's couplet well. It certainly evoked the sensation of cold. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you for adding your 5-7-5 to the Renga book. It describes the picture and follows Ulla's couplet well. It certainly evoked the sensation of cold. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Joan. We are almost done with it. I will start a new renga book after that.
Gypsy hugs :)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Blue (in all its shades) is my favourite colour, so I was bound to be drawn to this one. Indeed, I find it:
deep like the water
austere like the mountains
protected by the sky
Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Blue (in all its shades) is my favourite colour, so I was bound to be drawn to this one. Indeed, I find it:
deep like the water
austere like the mountains
protected by the sky
Well done.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Katherine. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from June Sargent
This is a great follow up - the blue tones do make my nose cold and my toes shiver - icy cold water. Time for some hot chocolate...maybe that will be my follow up!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is a great follow up - the blue tones do make my nose cold and my toes shiver - icy cold water. Time for some hot chocolate...maybe that will be my follow up!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good follow up idea. :)
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Comment from Gloria ....
This definitely sends a shiver down a person's spine. Ice cold blue water, such atmosphere, and clarity.
This is a fine addition to your Renga book that is coming along beautifully. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This definitely sends a shiver down a person's spine. Ice cold blue water, such atmosphere, and clarity.
This is a fine addition to your Renga book that is coming along beautifully. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written and beautiful addition to the Renga book. You used great descriptive words with very lovely imagery. You are very good at these type of poems. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written and beautiful addition to the Renga book. You used great descriptive words with very lovely imagery. You are very good at these type of poems. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Janetsue
You have responded really well to the previous chapter with this posting, Gypsy. I love the moon theme for poems and this is an excellent one. It is a calm photograph with a seasonal message.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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You have responded really well to the previous chapter with this posting, Gypsy. I love the moon theme for poems and this is an excellent one. It is a calm photograph with a seasonal message.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much.
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
I am pleasantly chilled by your icy blue image for your Renga addition. Your selected artwork nicely complements your few words in your Haiku. With limited filters, I was never able to recreate that image when I previously used an SLR camera - it is a fascinating image you share with us.
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Gypsy,
I am pleasantly chilled by your icy blue image for your Renga addition. Your selected artwork nicely complements your few words in your Haiku. With limited filters, I was never able to recreate that image when I previously used an SLR camera - it is a fascinating image you share with us.
Mark
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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I don't understand this...."never able to recreate that image when I previously used an SLR camera -" ???
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Such beautiful imagery! With your second line of "basin wreathed by blue mountains," makes me think of the moon looking into wash her face in the "icy cold water." Lovely!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Such beautiful imagery! With your second line of "basin wreathed by blue mountains," makes me think of the moon looking into wash her face in the "icy cold water." Lovely!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much Helen. Have a lovely day.
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Comment from roof35
This is an excellent follow-up to Ulla's couplet. The illustration is cold but lovely and pairs perfectly with your words. As with all your work, it is nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent follow-up to Ulla's couplet. The illustration is cold but lovely and pairs perfectly with your words. As with all your work, it is nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read it.
Gypsy hugs