Here we go again
I never learn7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Here We Go Again, has the right set up and looks inward to see if the rudder to one's life is driving us in a circle.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5, Here We Go Again, has the right set up and looks inward to see if the rudder to one's life is driving us in a circle.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thanks Bill for your interesting review. Cheers Jen.
Comment from palmart
I feel your poem like a mirror where we all can see reflected! In one order or any other, we hit the same stone twice (or more times)... This may be a real test that we are not perfect at all!! Good artwork to show this thinking moment!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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I feel your poem like a mirror where we all can see reflected! In one order or any other, we hit the same stone twice (or more times)... This may be a real test that we are not perfect at all!! Good artwork to show this thinking moment!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Many thanks.
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You`re welcome, writer!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Poignant words and we do it all the time and this is because we are human with open hearts and have faith that this time it will be the right choice, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Poignant words and we do it all the time and this is because we are human with open hearts and have faith that this time it will be the right choice, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Paul Borders
Oh my goodness, this submission I could have written. I was asking myself the same question just this morning. I reckon it's a trait we all share. I voted for your entry.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Oh my goodness, this submission I could have written. I was asking myself the same question just this morning. I reckon it's a trait we all share. I voted for your entry.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much for voting. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed this entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt event, but there is a slight grammatical problem in it. The first line should read:
As the time goes by.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt event, but there is a slight grammatical problem in it. The first line should read:
As the time goes by.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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You are right but too late to change it. Hey ho. Thanks a lot for the review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is correct in number of syllables per line, Mystery Poet. You give readers much to ponder. I believe we all can identify with your sentiments. I like the art choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Your contest entry is correct in number of syllables per line, Mystery Poet. You give readers much to ponder. I believe we all can identify with your sentiments. I like the art choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Many thanks Jan.
Comment from Aussie
Loved the pencil illustration to compliment you 5-7-5 contest entry. Yes, some lessons are like groundhog day. No one is perfect and we are here on planet earth to learn lessons. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Loved the pencil illustration to compliment you 5-7-5 contest entry. Yes, some lessons are like groundhog day. No one is perfect and we are here on planet earth to learn lessons. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks Aussie
