Sensual Refrain
A song that resonates through our very being...21 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Red hot and I can see why this was the runaway winner. Congratulations on this beautiful work. Six belated stars for you. :) ;) life... what can I say....
Sal XOs......
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Red hot and I can see why this was the runaway winner. Congratulations on this beautiful work. Six belated stars for you. :) ;) life... what can I say....
Sal XOs......
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Lady Sal... thank you, THANK YOU for such a great response topped off with stars! I don't usually do too much 'passionate poetry' but once in a while the muse wants to go there and, well, let's be honest:
NEVER ARGUE WITH THE MUSE!!
Am I right? 8-) Take care and enjoy the day! Yvette
Comment from sammielwf
YM.,
Isn't it wonderful that as writers we get to express the myriad of emotions that surround love and love making?
Your words create a sensuous image of desire...and passion.
Well done... Congratulations on this first place finish.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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YM.,
Isn't it wonderful that as writers we get to express the myriad of emotions that surround love and love making?
Your words create a sensuous image of desire...and passion.
Well done... Congratulations on this first place finish.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Such a wonderful review, Sammie... thank you, THANK YOU for such a great response topped off with stars! I don't usually do too much 'passionate poetry' but once in a while the muse wants to go there and, well, let's be honest:
NEVER ARGUE WITH THE MUSE!!
Am I right? 8-) Take care and enjoy the day!
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Never argue with the muse- sounds about right. and... don't eat liver!
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Bleck! Here-here!! ;) :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
*sigh*... this is why I did not want to read this one...*sigh* (LOL) Because I am here all alone and I KNEW it would make me feel my alone-ness. (LOL)
Music for the senses, this little gem...
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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*sigh*... this is why I did not want to read this one...*sigh* (LOL) Because I am here all alone and I KNEW it would make me feel my alone-ness. (LOL)
Music for the senses, this little gem...
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Whooooaa... this is an awesome review, Dawn! Thanx so much for your smiles this morning and for those awesome stars - started my weekend out just right!! :) ;) THANK YOU! ;)
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Very much deserved. :) You are most welcome.
Comment from Paul Borders
My vote for your entry placed you into a four way tie for third place. I hope your submission receives more votes because it's the best poem in this contest - in my opinion.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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My vote for your entry placed you into a four way tie for third place. I hope your submission receives more votes because it's the best poem in this contest - in my opinion.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Paul! Sometimes one just never knows, yeah? 😏😉 Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6-8, Sensual Refrain, has the proper formatting and brings the reader into the clinches with two lovers exploring their possibilities.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This 2-4-6-8, Sensual Refrain, has the proper formatting and brings the reader into the clinches with two lovers exploring their possibilities.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Bill! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
2-4-6-8 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A very sensual poem . Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the
2-4-6-8 Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A very sensual poem . Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy Blue! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A poem of passion! Oh, Lord, I remember those days, faintly! I like the expression you put down in words and I also like the painting. It enhances your poetry well. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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A poem of passion! Oh, Lord, I remember those days, faintly! I like the expression you put down in words and I also like the painting. It enhances your poetry well. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Patty! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Dick Waters
I wanted to comment on your poem - I really liked the total package.
The picture created enough attention to read the poem.
You chose a great companion color for the picture.
The choice of a musical piece was excellent to convey passion of the moment.
The fact that you represented both people feeling the symphony was a wise decision, and ties back to sharing the moment.
Good luck in the competition.
Dick
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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I wanted to comment on your poem - I really liked the total package.
The picture created enough attention to read the poem.
You chose a great companion color for the picture.
The choice of a musical piece was excellent to convey passion of the moment.
The fact that you represented both people feeling the symphony was a wise decision, and ties back to sharing the moment.
Good luck in the competition.
Dick
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Dick, for such an encouraging review... yes, passion should be a mutual composition... 😉 Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Boogienights
Excellent! I love the image you paired this with and the very sensual words you used. I really felt the passion. A great contest entry, best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Excellent! I love the image you paired this with and the very sensual words you used. I really felt the passion. A great contest entry, best of luck to you.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Boogienights! Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from royowen
I remember the heat of youth, which can be excruciating at times, that was long ago, and I wonder what I would think or handle those extremes of passion again, oh well, it's not a problem anymore, A good 2/4/6/8, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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I remember the heat of youth, which can be excruciating at times, that was long ago, and I wonder what I would think or handle those extremes of passion again, oh well, it's not a problem anymore, A good 2/4/6/8, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Roy! Have a wonderful weekend.
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You too
