Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the
5/7/5 November writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and picture, the color theme is perfect. I enjoyed the imagery. I would change the font color to something lighter. Good syllable count and connection between lines.

The last line subtext is akward...

ginger fox kisses

This would sound better ...

ginger fox's kiss


Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020

mystery writer here, haha. Thanks for great advice. I changed font color, added fox's and changed twirl to lift. I think much better... you so clever.. Cheers, have a great weekend.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review 13. I hope that you are happy and safe, cheers, j

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

That is a beautiful picture. I love this time of year, it has always been my favorite season, but sadly I have never lived where the leaves turn beautiful colors. A few trees in Calif would, but here in FL all is green all the time. This is a beautiful poem and I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review Roxanna. Love to spot those guys, like little princes. I hope that you are safe and happy, cheers, j