A Lovely Time
Cold arrives early in upstate New York!16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 for November, A Lovely Time, has the proper formatting and uses the senses to greet and say goodbye to the season through the chill, sights, and sounds of fall.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5 for November, A Lovely Time, has the proper formatting and uses the senses to greet and say goodbye to the season through the chill, sights, and sounds of fall.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Exactly what I was going for! Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A Lovely Time", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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"A Lovely Time", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review!
Dear Anon,
you're more than welcome.
God bless you, and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from equestrik
This is a good November presentation with a very nice picture as well as a poem that speaks of the common rital of migration. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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This is a good November presentation with a very nice picture as well as a poem that speaks of the common rital of migration. Best to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the nice review!
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
Just the other day, I saw about a hundred Canada Geese in three straggly V's, heading south. We've had quite a few on various lawns in Saint John for over a month now. They're congregating. Just in the adjacent field, Carvill's Field, we've had geese everyday for about a week. That's what the Cratchit's had for their Christmas feast!
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 November poem. Geese, colorful leaves falling, and cool breezes. That spells the end of Autumn, and Christmas is right around the corner. I also love this time of year, before winter's blast. I'll take the honking any day!
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Hi Mystery Poet,
Just the other day, I saw about a hundred Canada Geese in three straggly V's, heading south. We've had quite a few on various lawns in Saint John for over a month now. They're congregating. Just in the adjacent field, Carvill's Field, we've had geese everyday for about a week. That's what the Cratchit's had for their Christmas feast!
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 November poem. Geese, colorful leaves falling, and cool breezes. That spells the end of Autumn, and Christmas is right around the corner. I also love this time of year, before winter's blast. I'll take the honking any day!
Good Luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review. I love the honking!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me look forward to Autumn and Winter in your uplifting write and the changing seasons must be embraced as we have no choice! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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You made me look forward to Autumn and Winter in your uplifting write and the changing seasons must be embraced as we have no choice! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from zanya
Yes the title is interesting - a description of the month of November with its characteristic combination of 'chilly air ' and those 'Gorgeous leaves' that 'blanket the ground '
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Yes the title is interesting - a description of the month of November with its characteristic combination of 'chilly air ' and those 'Gorgeous leaves' that 'blanket the ground '
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much. Autumn here is gorgeous and my favorite time of year.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and
very nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
for the contest with good
syllable count, topic, and imagery.
-You show what is special
about November with good
descriptive detail.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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-Lovely artwork and
very nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
for the contest with good
syllable count, topic, and imagery.
-You show what is special
about November with good
descriptive detail.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for the nice review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
I really like your poem, but I don't associate a lovely time with the cold. We've already had snow with more to come in Minnesota. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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I really like your poem, but I don't associate a lovely time with the cold. We've already had snow with more to come in Minnesota. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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We will have snow any time now, and then it won?t stop! Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely piece. You paint an appealing picture of nature's sights and sounds in mid-fall at its cool best.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely piece. You paint an appealing picture of nature's sights and sounds in mid-fall at its cool best.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for such a lovely review!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Agree on loving this time of year. This is timely, as today will driving, just as I was looking at the colors of the trees in Massachusetts; We are at our peak, a flock of geese took off from the pond where I was driving.
So this poem brought that scene back to me today.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Agree on loving this time of year. This is timely, as today will driving, just as I was looking at the colors of the trees in Massachusetts; We are at our peak, a flock of geese took off from the pond where I was driving.
So this poem brought that scene back to me today.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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I am glad the scene came back to you, I love watching the geese both take off and land. Thanks for the nice review!
