Soldiers
Trees bracing for winter10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 for November, Soldiers, has the proper formatting and finds the guardians made bare yet standing still..........
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5 for November, Soldiers, has the proper formatting and finds the guardians made bare yet standing still..........
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is nicely written poem for November. Red , brown and gold leaves rustle across the cold ground. As bare trees stand tall. Good description for fall. Beautiful photo works well with your wording.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is nicely written poem for November. Red , brown and gold leaves rustle across the cold ground. As bare trees stand tall. Good description for fall. Beautiful photo works well with your wording.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
You set the scene very well with the colors that we are surrounded by. It gives the image of changing weather and the oncoming of a whole new season.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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You set the scene very well with the colors that we are surrounded by. It gives the image of changing weather and the oncoming of a whole new season.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
5/7/5 November writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and imagery. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice alliteration.
Good imagery of autumn colors and trees.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
5/7/5 November writing prompt contest. I like the presentation and imagery. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice alliteration.
Good imagery of autumn colors and trees.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 November poem about the trees standing in rows like soldiers waiting in full colour for winter to arrive to cover the fields in its white blanket.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 November poem about the trees standing in rows like soldiers waiting in full colour for winter to arrive to cover the fields in its white blanket.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from RodG
A very nice combo of artwork & poetry. Your imagery makes it easy to visualize this late autumn scene. Indeed those tall, bare trees do seem to be standing guard like soldiers.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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A very nice combo of artwork & poetry. Your imagery makes it easy to visualize this late autumn scene. Indeed those tall, bare trees do seem to be standing guard like soldiers.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from zanya
This 5-7-5 portrays the month of November in all its end of Autumn and beginning of Winter scenario - very good choice of language and full of color- nice pic
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5 portrays the month of November in all its end of Autumn and beginning of Winter scenario - very good choice of language and full of color- nice pic
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words pair nicely with your image, Mystery Author. The image is beautiful. I like the way you highlighted the trees and personified them.
Good job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Your words pair nicely with your image, Mystery Author. The image is beautiful. I like the way you highlighted the trees and personified them.
Good job with the syllable count per line.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was absolutely gorgeous. One of the best autumn poems I ever read. Incredible imagery, visuals, present presentation and artwork.
Best of luck in the contest - it should do very well.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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That was absolutely gorgeous. One of the best autumn poems I ever read. Incredible imagery, visuals, present presentation and artwork.
Best of luck in the contest - it should do very well.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks.
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"Thanks" - that reply is bit dry compared to my enthusiastic six star review (lol).
