Ever Wonder?
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks allegorically, through shinning word imagery, in a free flow of thoughts, that time is invisible and we are part of time, so none can separate time from us; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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This poem speaks allegorically, through shinning word imagery, in a free flow of thoughts, that time is invisible and we are part of time, so none can separate time from us; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, sir -- much appreciated! ;)
Comment from equestrik
I love the whimsical and fun rhythm of this write. Your poem is fun and I think very appealing and a pleasure to read. Nice job for the writing prompt and best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I love the whimsical and fun rhythm of this write. Your poem is fun and I think very appealing and a pleasure to read. Nice job for the writing prompt and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review here, E!! ;) You know, I really had no idea this was not a blind contest when I entered it - when the first review came in addressing me directly I was completely flummoxed! ;) Yeah, I know, silly blonde.... right? :) But I am so very glad that you enjoyed it and I do so appreciate your comments - thank you!! :) ;) Take care of you out there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I haven't any idea, either, I just wish it could slow down sometimes. I liked you lovely poem, Yvette, it brought a smile to my face. I can just see you talking to moths, birds and bees, but I do agree with you, those little rascals are definitely in cahoots with time! LOL! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I haven't any idea, either, I just wish it could slow down sometimes. I liked you lovely poem, Yvette, it brought a smile to my face. I can just see you talking to moths, birds and bees, but I do agree with you, those little rascals are definitely in cahoots with time! LOL! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Hooray for smiles because good knows that's where time goes: smiling at all those 'distractions', yeah? ;) :) Thanx so much for your review here, Sandra!! ;) You know, I really had no idea this was not a blind contest when I entered it - when the first review came in addressing me directly I was completely flummoxed! ;) Yeah, I know, silly blonde.... right? :) But I am so very glad that you enjoyed it and I do so appreciate your comments - thank you!! :) ;) Take care of you over there 'cross the pond and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
Apparently, birds, bees, and moths know but won't tell. How tacky of them. We humans must sit and wait for it to go at its on pace without knowing. Love the presentation, and the theme.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Apparently, birds, bees, and moths know but won't tell. How tacky of them. We humans must sit and wait for it to go at its on pace without knowing. Love the presentation, and the theme.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Hey, hey - there's that smiling face we all know and love!! ;) :) :) Thanx so much for your review here, Yvonne!! ;) You know, I really had no idea this was not a blind contest when I entered it - when the first review came in addressing me directly I was completely flummoxed! ;) Yeah, I know, silly blonde.... right? :) But I am so very glad that you enjoyed it and I do so appreciate your comments - thank you!! :) ;) Take care of you over/up there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from bhogg
Wow, I read the instructions for the format. Seems impossible, but you managed to write a well written post and found just the right art-work to blast it off the page. Well done.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Wow, I read the instructions for the format. Seems impossible, but you managed to write a well written post and found just the right art-work to blast it off the page. Well done.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for your review here, B!! ;) You know, I really had no idea this was not a blind contest when I entered it - when the first review came in addressing me directly I was completely flummoxed! ;) Yeah, I know, silly blonde.... right? :) But I am so very glad that you enjoyed it and I do so appreciate your comments - thank you!! :) ;) Take care of you out there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
This is basically a ballad form, normally 8686 quatrains, with abcb rhyming, (amazing grace is written in this form, disguised as a couplet work. Well done Yvette, this is unusual in that it's written in a clump, (I'd put it in couplets if I were you Yvette, just to fool them) great job, great theme, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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This is basically a ballad form, normally 8686 quatrains, with abcb rhyming, (amazing grace is written in this form, disguised as a couplet work. Well done Yvette, this is unusual in that it's written in a clump, (I'd put it in couplets if I were you Yvette, just to fool them) great job, great theme, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Lol! Okay, first I was thinking this was a blind contest ... silly blonde! ;) Second, thanx for the advice... I went with quatrains as a couple of the couplets (see what I did there - wink, wink!) Are sort of 'connected'... but thanks for that advice, sir!! ;) Hope all's well down over there... take care of you!! ;) Yvette
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You?re a clever girl,
Comment from Joan E.
I liked your choice of the 8-6 poem and your description of the form. Your discussion about time flying is very effective and the picture is the perfect match. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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I liked your choice of the 8-6 poem and your description of the form. Your discussion about time flying is very effective and the picture is the perfect match. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
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Oh, Joan - what an awesome review, my lady - thank you for it and those lovely stars!! ;) You know, I really had no idea this was not a blind contest when I entered it - when the first review came in addressing me directly I was completely flummoxed! ;) Yeah, I know, silly blonde.... right? :) But I am so very glad that you enjoyed it and I do so appreciate your comments (and their bright, shiny highlights!) - thank you!! :) ;) Take care of you out there and enjoy the upcoming weekend! ;) Yvette
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Thank you for your acknowledgement and good wishes. You do the same and stay well- Joan
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My pleasure--have a pleasant weekend- Joan
