Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Changing Season"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Changing Season
by dovemarie
Hello, wonderful 7/7 couplet. The presentation is stunning! The poem fits nicely with the previous chapter. Excellent job. Would you please add the renga rules to your author notes? That way the next participant knows what to do. Thank you!
Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
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https://www.fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=39516
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Changing Season
by dovemarie
Hello, wonderful 7/7 couplet. The presentation is stunning! The poem fits nicely with the previous chapter. Excellent job. Would you please add the renga rules to your author notes? That way the next participant knows what to do. Thank you!
Renga is a Japanese collaborative poetry form in which poets write alternating verses of 5-7-5 stanzas and 7-7 couplets which are linked in succession by multiple poets. Only the first 5/7/5 is a haiku; the rest 5/7/5 stanzas are only restricted to syllable count. Renga is older than haiku.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
(If you would like to read the previous chapters, copy and paste this link to your browser).
https://www.fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=39516
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Dear Gypsy, thank you for your comments and review. thank you for letting me be one of the authors of your book. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine addition to the Renga book and you conjured up those golden falling leaves here laving the trees naked for the winter season, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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A fine addition to the Renga book and you conjured up those golden falling leaves here laving the trees naked for the winter season, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x