A Vampire's Proposal
Love transcends death47 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize for this intriguing poem--startling imagery--clever ending--undead King / Living Queen. Whose neck will he feast on, I wonder? Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Congrats on your prize for this intriguing poem--startling imagery--clever ending--undead King / Living Queen. Whose neck will he feast on, I wonder? Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent entry in the rhyming poem contest...fitting well with the Halloween season. I am a romantic at heart and I especially enjoyed reading your concluding line. It is also a super photograph for the theme.
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This is an excellent entry in the rhyming poem contest...fitting well with the Halloween season. I am a romantic at heart and I especially enjoyed reading your concluding line. It is also a super photograph for the theme.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from Raul1
This is a spooky and frightening poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! Good luck on the contest!
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This is a spooky and frightening poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from robyn corum
L,
Be careful, little one. Those words are romantic and full of promise, but not all things are exactly as they appear... RUN AWAY!!!
One small note:
--> People(s')'s shutters close and doors lock,
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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L,
Be careful, little one. Those words are romantic and full of promise, but not all things are exactly as they appear... RUN AWAY!!!
One small note:
--> People(s')'s shutters close and doors lock,
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much. You have the best eyes.
Comment from Janet Foor
An unusual love poem of the vampire for his undead queen. Excellent poetic devices throughout - especially the rhyme and alliteration which make a poem flow and a joy to read aloud.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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An unusual love poem of the vampire for his undead queen. Excellent poetic devices throughout - especially the rhyme and alliteration which make a poem flow and a joy to read aloud.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from amada
Oh, a lovely poem about a cold and lonely vampire wishing the love of a warm and young skin. There are several magnetic lines that called this reader in. I think love themes can sometimes trespass the focused borders of reality.
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Oh, a lovely poem about a cold and lonely vampire wishing the love of a warm and young skin. There are several magnetic lines that called this reader in. I think love themes can sometimes trespass the focused borders of reality.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from dmt1967
I think this story in a poem is very well written and I enjoyed the beat. I thought it was very well written and flowed very well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
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I think this story in a poem is very well written and I enjoyed the beat. I thought it was very well written and flowed very well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from CD Richards
This would have made a most worthy entry for the Halloween contest as well. Excellent rhyming, which is what it's all about for this contest. I think the young lady should consider herself very lucky he seems to have had a change of heart along the way. A well-written piece, best of luck in the contest. Craig
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This would have made a most worthy entry for the Halloween contest as well. Excellent rhyming, which is what it's all about for this contest. I think the young lady should consider herself very lucky he seems to have had a change of heart along the way. A well-written piece, best of luck in the contest. Craig
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
Comment from nomi338
A familiar theme of love denied by the fact that the two lovers are incredibly unmatched. Sometimes it's two people of the same gender, sometimes it is two people of different religions or races, warring countries or warring families. In either case the relationship is threatened because of obstacles that can seem to be insurmountable.
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A familiar theme of love denied by the fact that the two lovers are incredibly unmatched. Sometimes it's two people of the same gender, sometimes it is two people of different religions or races, warring countries or warring families. In either case the relationship is threatened because of obstacles that can seem to be insurmountable.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
Comment from Ulla
And it is lovely. I read your wonderful poem a few times and every time I got something new from it. A vampire love that is quite unusual. I am a prose writer but I like poetry and I loved your story within. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
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And it is lovely. I read your wonderful poem a few times and every time I got something new from it. A vampire love that is quite unusual. I am a prose writer but I like poetry and I loved your story within. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020