My Musician
The thunder of heartstrings silenced.14 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
This is beautifully written and almost sumptuous. Great use of metaphors and imagery. And, the artwork is perfect. Congratulations...you're worthy of one of my sixes.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This is beautifully written and almost sumptuous. Great use of metaphors and imagery. And, the artwork is perfect. Congratulations...you're worthy of one of my sixes.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for the bonus star.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a very touching free write that resonated with me and your words are powerful, sorrowful and honest, I could identify with these words and this is a well deserved six stars from me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This is a very touching free write that resonated with me and your words are powerful, sorrowful and honest, I could identify with these words and this is a well deserved six stars from me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the bonus star.
Comment from Mastery
Hi Alice. This poem deserves six stars but I have squandered early this week. So sorry. I love this entire poem but especially these lines:
"skimming love's surface
in search of
the musician
who once
whispered
them to life"
Bless you, my friend. (I owe you one) Bob
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Hi Alice. This poem deserves six stars but I have squandered early this week. So sorry. I love this entire poem but especially these lines:
"skimming love's surface
in search of
the musician
who once
whispered
them to life"
Bless you, my friend. (I owe you one) Bob
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Bob.
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:) Bob
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:) Bob
Comment from Mary Vigasin
beautifully written poem of the loss that gave her music life and inspiration. Your reader in this writing can hear the silence.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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beautifully written poem of the loss that gave her music life and inspiration. Your reader in this writing can hear the silence.
Well done.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about a couple who live in harmony is broken when the one is taken away when words cannot find the melody without the other.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about a couple who live in harmony is broken when the one is taken away when words cannot find the melody without the other.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the knid review.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a touching poem that I'm sure many can relate too. Its hard to believe now, but you will find the music again. Its all around us, just waiting to be listened to. Thanks for sharing this lovely verse.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This is a touching poem that I'm sure many can relate too. Its hard to believe now, but you will find the music again. Its all around us, just waiting to be listened to. Thanks for sharing this lovely verse.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sad, interesting, clear and creative. The poem
expresses well strong details of feeling felt. I pondered on the theme
of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes
well with this poem. Hope you had a great weekend!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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The author's words are sad, interesting, clear and creative. The poem
expresses well strong details of feeling felt. I pondered on the theme
of these words. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes
well with this poem. Hope you had a great weekend!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely presentation of both a well composed poem and a really creative sillouette. The sadness when a break-up occurs can really make one feel paralysed.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This is a lovely presentation of both a well composed poem and a really creative sillouette. The sadness when a break-up occurs can really make one feel paralysed.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a wonderfully done poem in the romantic tradition.
I liked "silent instrument,,,without a melody."
The last five lines were my personal favorites.
As we are living in 2020, I feel compelled to say that a woman is fine on her own and can have a very meaningful life without a partner.
As a gently aging woman with a romantic heart, my preferences run much more to love than to political correctness.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is a wonderfully done poem in the romantic tradition.
I liked "silent instrument,,,without a melody."
The last five lines were my personal favorites.
As we are living in 2020, I feel compelled to say that a woman is fine on her own and can have a very meaningful life without a partner.
As a gently aging woman with a romantic heart, my preferences run much more to love than to political correctness.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I discovered that same truth years ago.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written poem. Love your wording and your writing style. In the lingering shadow of his parting. She began her odyssey into the morrows sea of loneliness. Without him
She was a silent instrument wandering through empty lyrics without a melody. Well
Done. Awesome photo.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written poem. Love your wording and your writing style. In the lingering shadow of his parting. She began her odyssey into the morrows sea of loneliness. Without him
She was a silent instrument wandering through empty lyrics without a melody. Well
Done. Awesome photo.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Your welcome