Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Winter Hibernation"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You always bring the seasons to my ears and this one is no exception as the beers sleep during the cold winter with their thick coat to keep them warm, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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You always bring the seasons to my ears and this one is no exception as the beers sleep during the cold winter with their thick coat to keep them warm, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Dolly. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Animals are so precise in their hibernation, starting early enough to ensure that they don't remain trapped awake when the bad weather really kicks in. This poem is timely, with an interesting illustration. Like you, I would also like to go to sleep and waken up to find that better time were upon us.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Animals are so precise in their hibernation, starting early enough to ensure that they don't remain trapped awake when the bad weather really kicks in. This poem is timely, with an interesting illustration. Like you, I would also like to go to sleep and waken up to find that better time were upon us.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your renga, Gypsy. Its message is clear. The image choice works well, too. I love the quote you added in your notes. What a great way to sum up so many things' in a few well-chosen words.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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You did a great job with your renga, Gypsy. Its message is clear. The image choice works well, too. I love the quote you added in your notes. What a great way to sum up so many things' in a few well-chosen words.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Jan. Have a joyful weekend.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding this 7-7 couplet and picture to the Renga Book. It appears quite symbolic considering the times we live in. I appreciate your trying to keep hope alive. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you for adding this 7-7 couplet and picture to the Renga Book. It appears quite symbolic considering the times we live in. I appreciate your trying to keep hope alive. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Cheers,
Gypsy
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Enjoy your weekend--it seems a little cooler. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Very interesting and well-done way to embrace the 7-7 format.
It tells a story; something hard to do with the limitations of the format.
I loved the artwork: the bear and especially the litle human figure.
Really good job.
I don't know if this is for a contest, but if so, it is a strong entry.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Very interesting and well-done way to embrace the 7-7 format.
It tells a story; something hard to do with the limitations of the format.
I loved the artwork: the bear and especially the litle human figure.
Really good job.
I don't know if this is for a contest, but if so, it is a strong entry.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. It's not for a contest, it's for a multi-author book of Japanese poetry called Renga. You are welcome to try.
Cheers,
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 7/7 couplet you have penned for the Renga book. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. My friend please don't be discouraged. This life is but a swift vapor and the best part is yet to come when Jesus Christ appears for His bride. Just hang in there. love you, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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This is a very well written 7/7 couplet you have penned for the Renga book. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. My friend please don't be discouraged. This life is but a swift vapor and the best part is yet to come when Jesus Christ appears for His bride. Just hang in there. love you, Teri
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Cheers,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes, she had to make sure all was well before settling in for her long recuperative sleep.
Excellent addition to your Renga book and most cool artwork.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Yes, she had to make sure all was well before settling in for her long recuperative sleep.
Excellent addition to your Renga book and most cool artwork.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Gloria. :) Happy weekend.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes Gypsy, we want the orange pumpkin head to go into permanent hibernation on November 3rd.
Like how you connected the bear hibernation idea and the Election. You chose appropriate artwork to accompany your renga contribution.
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Yes Gypsy, we want the orange pumpkin head to go into permanent hibernation on November 3rd.
Like how you connected the bear hibernation idea and the Election. You chose appropriate artwork to accompany your renga contribution.
Mark
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from karenina
Amen to this! I am weary... Politics has stained my soul today. I am voting tomorrow and will be happy to use my voice as I pray more do than ever before... Change. Please!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Amen to this! I am weary... Politics has stained my soul today. I am voting tomorrow and will be happy to use my voice as I pray more do than ever before... Change. Please!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Good for you! I voted on the tenth, we can vote early in California. Here to change! Chin chin :)
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and I'll feel so desolate, not to mention outraged, if on November Third Trump somehow is declared the winner--it was a shock on election day 2016, but this'll be so much worse
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and I'll feel so desolate, not to mention outraged, if on November Third Trump somehow is declared the winner--it was a shock on election day 2016, but this'll be so much worse
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Trump's going to lose but God only knows what will happen after. It's a freaking nightmare. Thank you.