Comment from
Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written modern fable. The real test fir sincere friendship is when a crisis come we will see how people react selfishly or caring for those around you rather than yourself.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
Exactly, at least try..
Thanks for the review Sandra, hope all is well with you, cheers, j
Comment from
humpwhistle
Ain't that the truth? I think there's a moral to be had by the would-be robbers, too. Maybe something like: If you're late to the game, don't expect to be a big winner.
Do people actually 'scamper' in life and death situations?
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
Haha, maybe that will be my next fable entry.
Thanks for the review Lee. I will change scamper to dash, cheers.
Have a great weekend and stay safe please, j