Beside You ...
Sonnet18 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so sorry to be so late with this. What a beautifully written and illustrated poem. Your talent for romantic poetry in any form is amazing. I especially loved this one. Superb!
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars for your crown.
Sally XOs.....
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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I'm so sorry to be so late with this. What a beautifully written and illustrated poem. Your talent for romantic poetry in any form is amazing. I especially loved this one. Superb!
Sending you my best today as always, and six stars for your crown.
Sally XOs.....
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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You are so sweet! Thank you for the wonderful review!!
Comment from Poetic Friend
I am SO glad that I have sixer remaining for this impeccable poem. I want to give this poem all the stars that it deserves.
This is such a beautiful love poem. The sonnet lends itself to such beauty. I love the word choice, the tenderness, the love, the imagery and personification. This poem seems to be a winner to me.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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I am SO glad that I have sixer remaining for this impeccable poem. I want to give this poem all the stars that it deserves.
This is such a beautiful love poem. The sonnet lends itself to such beauty. I love the word choice, the tenderness, the love, the imagery and personification. This poem seems to be a winner to me.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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6 stars?? aw thank you!...yes, I am totally hooked on the Sonnet. Thank you for the review!
Comment from June Sargent
This is a beautiful entry for the love poem contest. The gentle rhythm and rhyme takes us to another place where shadows dance along a star-gazed trail. That is how love should feel like - a constant, soothing warmth...not bungy jumping. I ejoyed this piece immensely.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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This is a beautiful entry for the love poem contest. The gentle rhythm and rhyme takes us to another place where shadows dance along a star-gazed trail. That is how love should feel like - a constant, soothing warmth...not bungy jumping. I ejoyed this piece immensely.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you June!! Much appreciated and 6 stars too! Awwww :-)))
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are beautiful, filled with details and are creative. I liked the title of this poem. I found this love poem to convey comfort.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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The author's words are beautiful, filled with details and are creative. I liked the title of this poem. I found this love poem to convey comfort.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem. Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Aw Thank you for reading and leaving such a sweet review!
Comment from Boogienights
How lovely. I fell in love with sonnets, yours is beautifully done. A lovely image completes the sentiment, a dream of loves splendor. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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How lovely. I fell in love with sonnets, yours is beautifully done. A lovely image completes the sentiment, a dream of loves splendor. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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I love Sonnets too...thanks for the kind review!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love sonnet. The best part USC to know a loved one is right beside us all the time and car can only reach out to touch him anytime.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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A very well-written love sonnet. The best part USC to know a loved one is right beside us all the time and car can only reach out to touch him anytime.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review!! Much appreciated!
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, Beside You, with sweet and alluring words takes the reader through a romantic interlude with dreams as the river and love as the vessel.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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This sonnet, Beside You, with sweet and alluring words takes the reader through a romantic interlude with dreams as the river and love as the vessel.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Thanks Bill for the beautiful review!
Comment from Mastery
Well, hello Susan. Long time since I've seen a post by you. But this love poem is truly a gem.
I liked this stanza best of all:
"Beside you, journeyed countless midnight dreams,
soared spangled heavens ~ swam vast oceans deep;
I think you have the winner here. good luck. Bob
for poets oft imagine ... so, it seems,
cascading fantasies, as lovers sleep."
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Well, hello Susan. Long time since I've seen a post by you. But this love poem is truly a gem.
I liked this stanza best of all:
"Beside you, journeyed countless midnight dreams,
soared spangled heavens ~ swam vast oceans deep;
I think you have the winner here. good luck. Bob
for poets oft imagine ... so, it seems,
cascading fantasies, as lovers sleep."
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Yes, writing has slowed down a bit...but I'm till trying. Thanks for reading Bob...hope all is well with you :-) ( Glad you enjoyed this little sonnet)
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I certainly did enjoy it. :) Bob
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I certainly did enjoy it. :) Bob
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine sonnet for the contest and you brought deep love and devotion here as we make memories to last. Perfect meter and rhymes, a joy to read Susan, (I'm all our of sixes, but this deserves one) love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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A fine sonnet for the contest and you brought deep love and devotion here as we make memories to last. Perfect meter and rhymes, a joy to read Susan, (I'm all our of sixes, but this deserves one) love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
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Sweet Dolly! Thank you again for such a lovely review! I do appreciate it :-)
Comment from royowen
What a lovely, love poem Susan, you are a good poet, with a nice touch on narrative and rhyme together, I like the particular, like the restless flow of water over rock, bringing the blessing of the water chattering to the restful morning, well done, good luck, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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What a lovely, love poem Susan, you are a good poet, with a nice touch on narrative and rhyme together, I like the particular, like the restless flow of water over rock, bringing the blessing of the water chattering to the restful morning, well done, good luck, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
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Awww Thanks Roy! I appreciate the compliment! Thank you for reading! :-)
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Most welcome Susan
