Peach Of The Beach
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(highlight and nearby are single words) Well-done! Beautifully structured, masterfully narrated, excellent dialog and fresh imagery--summer's heated breath! Cheers. LIZ
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(highlight and nearby are single words) Well-done! Beautifully structured, masterfully narrated, excellent dialog and fresh imagery--summer's heated breath! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
Comment from equestrik
It is interesting learning more about Polly as you develop her character. Nice job with that. I also just read a bit of your bio. 'Colors' is a good program. Good for you.
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It is interesting learning more about Polly as you develop her character. Nice job with that. I also just read a bit of your bio. 'Colors' is a good program. Good for you.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020