He Loves Me or He Loves Me Not
Either way, life does go on...28 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Perfect rhyming and flow and I so enjoyed the repeated line to drive home your point, we recognise the absence of love more than its presence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Perfect rhyming and flow and I so enjoyed the repeated line to drive home your point, we recognise the absence of love more than its presence, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Wow I must say your poem moved me it was so beautiful I feel like you were speaking of my life oh how I can relate God Bless You and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Wow I must say your poem moved me it was so beautiful I feel like you were speaking of my life oh how I can relate God Bless You and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Powerful message conveyed through fresh imagery--your note succinctly supports the poem's theme of cultivating your own sense of worth vs having it depend on whether he loves you. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Powerful message conveyed through fresh imagery--your note succinctly supports the poem's theme of cultivating your own sense of worth vs having it depend on whether he loves you. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Yes! Thank you so much!!
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "'Tis one thing sure in cupid's shot:
He'll love you or he'll love you not!", because I thought that was a really clever way to end the poem! Great job!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Mark 10:9 New International Version (NIV)
9 Therefore what God has joined together, let no one separate."
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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My favorite part was, "'Tis one thing sure in cupid's shot:
He'll love you or he'll love you not!", because I thought that was a really clever way to end the poem! Great job!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Mark 10:9 New International Version (NIV)
9 Therefore what God has joined together, let no one separate."
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review this evening.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I like this. I like how you share that sometimes life can hurt our ability to love. It's true and at the same time very sad. This flows well. Your rhymes are perfect in that no word seems forced. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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I like this. I like how you share that sometimes life can hurt our ability to love. It's true and at the same time very sad. This flows well. Your rhymes are perfect in that no word seems forced. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a lovely entry for the "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" writing prompt.
Well rhymed, a nice rhythm. This tells a beautiful story of love through the ages.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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I think this is a lovely entry for the "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" writing prompt.
Well rhymed, a nice rhythm. This tells a beautiful story of love through the ages.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Loved your poem.
It has humor, wistfulness, longing, engery.
I liked the way each stranza moved the action along in time as the narrator got older.
The cadence was nice and consistent.
It worked very well to have the same line end each stanza. It seemed to stablize the action through time, if you know what I mean.
I liked the art too.
Wonderful job.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Loved your poem.
It has humor, wistfulness, longing, engery.
I liked the way each stranza moved the action along in time as the narrator got older.
The cadence was nice and consistent.
It worked very well to have the same line end each stanza. It seemed to stablize the action through time, if you know what I mean.
I liked the art too.
Wonderful job.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Oh, Cynthia, such a lovely review here -- I am so very glad you enjoyed my take on the contest, and those bright stars are so very appreciated!! THANK YOU for them and for your encouraging comments! Here's sending you smiles to fill the remainder of your week! ;)
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You are entirely welcome.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
First the rhyming is perfect and saying it out loud even makes it better.
It was quite a well done poem of reality and of love.
Very well written and I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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First the rhyming is perfect and saying it out loud even makes it better.
It was quite a well done poem of reality and of love.
Very well written and I enjoyed the read.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much!
