Golden Love
Love that is real, may change but it is forever..3 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Very nice poem.
You do a good job of distinguishing the different kind of love or older age from the younger versions. It is different but necessarily worse.
As an old bat, I particularly loved the last line
When you are young, you have no idea that a peaceful night can be a wondrous gift.
Very sweet and strong contest entry.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
Very nice poem.
You do a good job of distinguishing the different kind of love or older age from the younger versions. It is different but necessarily worse.
As an old bat, I particularly loved the last line
When you are young, you have no idea that a peaceful night can be a wondrous gift.
Very sweet and strong contest entry.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your read, review, and encouraging words. We old bats can use a good night's sleep.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
haha. I like this. I like how you don't view the holding hands stage of your relationship as something bad. I thought this was creative but also a wise and enjoyable poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
haha. I like this. I like how you don't view the holding hands stage of your relationship as something bad. I thought this was creative but also a wise and enjoyable poem. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your read and your encouraging review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not writing prompt.
This tells a cute and sweet story of the progression of love.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
I think this is a good entry for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not writing prompt.
This tells a cute and sweet story of the progression of love.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2020
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Thanks much for your read and encouraging review.