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Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your poem it is a perfect match
You capture my attention not only form the picture... Your words are so true God will give you everything you need
Thank you for sharing
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I love the artwork you choose for your poem it is a perfect match
You capture my attention not only form the picture... Your words are so true God will give you everything you need
Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
God doesn't take care of our wants, be makes sure our needs are met. If you want to hear God laugh tell him your plans. Everything you said is absolutely true. Very nice job.
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God doesn't take care of our wants, be makes sure our needs are met. If you want to hear God laugh tell him your plans. Everything you said is absolutely true. Very nice job.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write and I have some suggestions for you:
God gives me everything that He finds me deserving for, indeed a (good) thing
Only He knows my righteous, real need, He gives me His time.
I desire (and) wish (for) my dreams (fulfilled)
He gifts (me) more, His Plan (is) worth for living.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A faithful write and I have some suggestions for you:
God gives me everything that He finds me deserving for, indeed a (good) thing
Only He knows my righteous, real need, He gives me His time.
I desire (and) wish (for) my dreams (fulfilled)
He gifts (me) more, His Plan (is) worth for living.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the review with suggestions.
I have already edited the poem.
Please read if you like and offer me your valuable suggestion on the edited poem.
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from Raul1
God only gives good things for nice people only. They are the only ones who deserve it. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
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God only gives good things for nice people only. They are the only ones who deserve it. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Sylvia Page
God always gives everything that is deserving but in His time. He knows your worth, He knows you want and when you want. He usually does not give in excess of your need but what is deserving.
Very well written.
Blessings
Sylvia
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God always gives everything that is deserving but in His time. He knows your worth, He knows you want and when you want. He usually does not give in excess of your need but what is deserving.
Very well written.
Blessings
Sylvia
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem about God that provides for us what we need, because He knows exactly what and how much we need to fulfill our dreams day bay day.
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A very well-written three line poem about God that provides for us what we need, because He knows exactly what and how much we need to fulfill our dreams day bay day.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Exceptional as God is religion free, so should we be instead of condemning the belief of others. He knows us before we even think, how can there be any question,
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Exceptional as God is religion free, so should we be instead of condemning the belief of others. He knows us before we even think, how can there be any question,
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Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
