What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem is a good reminder for us to be careful of what we say verbally or in writing because it can all reflect badly in life and in death.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
Joan
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This short poem is a good reminder for us to be careful of what we say verbally or in writing because it can all reflect badly in life and in death.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from mackenzietastan
I think this poem expresses a truth. We are what we express before departure. You managed to express a complex sentiment in so few words. Good job! The art work also matches perfectly.
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I think this poem expresses a truth. We are what we express before departure. You managed to express a complex sentiment in so few words. Good job! The art work also matches perfectly.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from Mike J
Nice poem, you were able to create a great message with just 15 words. And I think the picture fits the poem very well. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Nice poem, you were able to create a great message with just 15 words. And I think the picture fits the poem very well. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from estory
I liked the rhythm of this piece, I think you constructed it very well for musical effect, the repetitions of 'or' worked very well here in that regard. It has a mechanical feel to it, a stream of words in sequence, in a pattern. estory
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I liked the rhythm of this piece, I think you constructed it very well for musical effect, the repetitions of 'or' worked very well here in that regard. It has a mechanical feel to it, a stream of words in sequence, in a pattern. estory
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from Kelly Hanna
An excellent job! You we able to follow the rules of the poem beautifully. The work provoked thought within me. Which I always appreciate in a great poem. You send the Recognition! Great job!
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An excellent job! You we able to follow the rules of the poem beautifully. The work provoked thought within me. Which I always appreciate in a great poem. You send the Recognition! Great job!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from nomi338
Obviously the things that a man speaks comes from or is influenced by what he is thinking. In the Bible, Matthew chapter 15, verse 11 says: : It is not what enters into a man's mouth that defiles him, but it is what comes out of his mouth that defiles him." So, my best advice is to not only watch what you say, but also watch what you think. If you think bad thoughts and are afraid that you might say the wrong thing, "Put a sock in it."
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Obviously the things that a man speaks comes from or is influenced by what he is thinking. In the Bible, Matthew chapter 15, verse 11 says: : It is not what enters into a man's mouth that defiles him, but it is what comes out of his mouth that defiles him." So, my best advice is to not only watch what you say, but also watch what you think. If you think bad thoughts and are afraid that you might say the wrong thing, "Put a sock in it."
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from Badger_29
Perfect conform and gnashing three qualifications for a contest the picture is great religious scripture. It moves Waimea put in one of my phones recently about the sum of all you do being the fulcrum and everything is played against by the one judge on The Day of Reckoning. Flowed well you like to Great concept before departure I see no room for improvement
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Perfect conform and gnashing three qualifications for a contest the picture is great religious scripture. It moves Waimea put in one of my phones recently about the sum of all you do being the fulcrum and everything is played against by the one judge on The Day of Reckoning. Flowed well you like to Great concept before departure I see no room for improvement
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from apky
You have once again given the reader something spiritual to mull over.
I particuarly like the artwork you used for this, the Galatians phrase something a lot of people would be well advised to ponder over and take to heart.
Excellent and rewarding.
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You have once again given the reader something spiritual to mull over.
I particuarly like the artwork you used for this, the Galatians phrase something a lot of people would be well advised to ponder over and take to heart.
Excellent and rewarding.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"What You Express That's You're Base", is short, succinct and very much to the point.
Each of these words are woven with the golden threads of truth. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"What You Express That's You're Base", is short, succinct and very much to the point.
Each of these words are woven with the golden threads of truth. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
So very true. What come out of the mouth is from the heart. We are often what we speak and think. Unless we are really good at deceiving, which sadly many are. But they always get found out. I hope when I depart people will think well of me. Hope you do well in the contest.
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So very true. What come out of the mouth is from the heart. We are often what we speak and think. Unless we are really good at deceiving, which sadly many are. But they always get found out. I hope when I depart people will think well of me. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018