God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from Gloria ....
Congratulations to you, Dr Allcreator, it's a lovely thought and certainly a beginning, but until truth is stated, quite a difficult if not impossible task.
Nice idea for you to sponsor this contest and best of luck to you. You have successfully used the words required. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Congratulations to you, Dr Allcreator, it's a lovely thought and certainly a beginning, but until truth is stated, quite a difficult if not impossible task.
Nice idea for you to sponsor this contest and best of luck to you. You have successfully used the words required. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written inspiring and encouraging sentence on how we can get our human values back in place. It comes all back to loving God and our neighbor as ourselves and an attitude shift from don't care to caring.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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A very well-written inspiring and encouraging sentence on how we can get our human values back in place. It comes all back to loving God and our neighbor as ourselves and an attitude shift from don't care to caring.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written contest entry for the Make the World a better place you have penned. You had some good ideas, but I don't think it is possible to trust everybody due to the mind set of so many that are not very nice. I do trust my Lord for sure! Best wishes in the contest my friend! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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This is a very well written contest entry for the Make the World a better place you have penned. You had some good ideas, but I don't think it is possible to trust everybody due to the mind set of so many that are not very nice. I do trust my Lord for sure! Best wishes in the contest my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Raul1
Nice poem! I believe that we need to make the world a better place. First we start by making peace to people who are willing to do it. Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Nice poem! I believe that we need to make the world a better place. First we start by making peace to people who are willing to do it. Excellent poem!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
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You're welcome
Comment from judiverse
Forty words--that's difficult to do. You have a wonderful idea for the subject and you have your required words in. However, you still need to do some edits before contest time. I don't know what you mean by quality perseverance, so I'd suggest leaving it at just perseverance. Your first sentence might be "We're losing human values of patience and perseverance." Break up the next sentence, as it's run-on. Also, try to vary your sentence beginnings. Also, can you place your artwork above your writing, so the rating and comments aren't separated? judi
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Forty words--that's difficult to do. You have a wonderful idea for the subject and you have your required words in. However, you still need to do some edits before contest time. I don't know what you mean by quality perseverance, so I'd suggest leaving it at just perseverance. Your first sentence might be "We're losing human values of patience and perseverance." Break up the next sentence, as it's run-on. Also, try to vary your sentence beginnings. Also, can you place your artwork above your writing, so the rating and comments aren't separated? judi
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
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You're welcome. Have a great day. judi
Comment from pbomar1115
I can't agree with you more, however, with our new leader of the free world, your words ring hollow when the action we show are different. I believe we should show your words.
Phillip
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I can't agree with you more, however, with our new leader of the free world, your words ring hollow when the action we show are different. I believe we should show your words.
Phillip
Comment Written 31-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
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You're welcome.