Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter -2 "A Dew and A Pearl"Writing for Brooke
90 total reviews
Comment from skye
What a wonderful poem, a true tribute to her talent and to yours.
It is smooth, fits the image I have of Brooke, and says what we all want her to hear... get well, there is much still here for you. There is love from your friends as well.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
  |
What a wonderful poem, a true tribute to her talent and to yours.
It is smooth, fits the image I have of Brooke, and says what we all want her to hear... get well, there is much still here for you. There is love from your friends as well.
Excellent.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Dear Sanku,
I am out of sixes but it would not be enough anyway. Of all I have read in the tributes to Brooke, this one captures her essence in a most perfect way. Thank you for sharing and for your constant encouragement.
Love, Carolyn
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
Dear Sanku,
I am out of sixes but it would not be enough anyway. Of all I have read in the tributes to Brooke, this one captures her essence in a most perfect way. Thank you for sharing and for your constant encouragement.
Love, Carolyn
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.,Carolyn for these lovely words and wish for a six star.Your words have made my day.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork for your poem, which is written very well.
-I appreciated your author notes that show how important Brooke is to you, as she is to many on FS.
-Nice rhyme and good images throughout the poem.
-Stanza one is a nice introduction with good imagery and alliteration.
-The following are very good lines and glad you told a little about their significance:
"She spies falling stars through the trees
dreams of spinning sunshine to shawls"
-Very nice, heartfelt conclusion.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
-Nice artwork for your poem, which is written very well.
-I appreciated your author notes that show how important Brooke is to you, as she is to many on FS.
-Nice rhyme and good images throughout the poem.
-Stanza one is a nice introduction with good imagery and alliteration.
-The following are very good lines and glad you told a little about their significance:
"She spies falling stars through the trees
dreams of spinning sunshine to shawls"
-Very nice, heartfelt conclusion.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
-
You are welcome.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Sanku: You have written a beautiful tribute to adewpearl who loves us all. She helped me with commas. Then, I took her poetry class and learned the beat. I hope that you printed her poems for your journal. We all need to pray for Brooke as we circle around her in love. I pray that Brooke will be in health as her soul and body prospers. Jesus paid the price for us all. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
Sanku: You have written a beautiful tribute to adewpearl who loves us all. She helped me with commas. Then, I took her poetry class and learned the beat. I hope that you printed her poems for your journal. We all need to pray for Brooke as we circle around her in love. I pray that Brooke will be in health as her soul and body prospers. Jesus paid the price for us all. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Thank you for a lovely tribute to one who has sown word-seeds all around the world. What a word-garden is now blossoming to cheer her in the race and to beckon her home.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
Thank you for a lovely tribute to one who has sown word-seeds all around the world. What a word-garden is now blossoming to cheer her in the race and to beckon her home.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from sebe
a perfect poem. skillful narration. it seems to me that there is a sense of wonder in this poem. that is very important. of course everybody can not see the wonder in this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
 |
a perfect poem. skillful narration. it seems to me that there is a sense of wonder in this poem. that is very important. of course everybody can not see the wonder in this poem.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much for this honour. normally i find it very difficult to rhyme ,but since brooke is such a perfect wordsmith I felt I must take trouble to rhyme.Thank you once again.
Comment from judester
This is such a personal and heartwarming tribute to your friend. A poem with references to her writing will certainly bring joy and a smile.
Bless you, this is wonderfully sweet, cheers judester
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
This is such a personal and heartwarming tribute to your friend. A poem with references to her writing will certainly bring joy and a smile.
Bless you, this is wonderfully sweet, cheers judester
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from zanya
A beautiful reflection here on multiple daily 'wonders' of the natural world which we frequently fail to notice but which our beloved Poet extraordinaire brought to our attention
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
A beautiful reflection here on multiple daily 'wonders' of the natural world which we frequently fail to notice but which our beloved Poet extraordinaire brought to our attention
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much .
Comment from Jackarrie
This poem is beautifully written, it is so sincere in your well chosen words and your thoughts. It is such a pleasure to read all the good wishes for Brooke, as he really deserves all our love and wishes for a recovery real soon.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
This poem is beautifully written, it is so sincere in your well chosen words and your thoughts. It is such a pleasure to read all the good wishes for Brooke, as he really deserves all our love and wishes for a recovery real soon.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Typo in notes "poem" should be poems. This is a nice tribute sure she will enjoy very much. She does like her little yellow flowers.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
|
Typo in notes "poem" should be poems. This is a nice tribute sure she will enjoy very much. She does like her little yellow flowers.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
-
Thank you very much.