Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

You must be talking about a different increment of dandelions seeds. All the first
few thousand lit in my yard. A great thing about Brooke's reviewing was she'd
tear your gibberish apart, tell you what to fix-and then give you five. Carrot vs. stick. Excellent counting poem.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Yes, she would do that quite often, Red. Not many others are as gentle as Brooke in handling your goof-ups.
Thanks for reading. I appreciate the comments. ~Dean

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

That's a very moving and sweet poem, Dean, and I agree with its purpose. Please send a fluffy seed for me. I don't know why she's sick and not with us, and I've had much less time to be with her than all of you, but I feel the collective sorrow and pray, with you, for her recovery,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks very much for taking the time to read and respond to my poetic dedication to Brooke, Rhonda. I very much appreciate it, and I know that Brooke will too. ~Dean

Comment from amahra

Excellent

This a great ode to a lovely lady and great poet. The art work is fabulous and the meaning is deep. Dandelions was one of her wonderful poems she wrote. I wish hr God's speed.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for taking the time to read this, amahra. I very much appreciate the kind comments. ~Dean

Comment from TomyKan

Excellent

I do not know Brooke or her circumstances, but I'm sure she will love your beautiful poem. Well written, with good rhythm. rhyme and flow. wonderful artwork. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks very much, Tom. Brooke recently lost her sister, and now has an advanced from of MS. She's the site's #1 poet, and has been for many years running. Justifiably so, I might add. I'm glad to know that you enjoyed it, and it's my sincerest wish that Brooke does as well.
Thanks again for your kind comments and review. ~Dean

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Dean
this poem you have dedicated to Brook is simply divine. I can just image her face when she reads your words of beauty and meaning pertinent to her alone. I will reiterate your last stanza as it does speak for us all

One last seed, a lighter fellow
I'm sending to our friend,
aglow in vivid sunshine yellow,
hoping she'll return to us again.

Well done Dean.

Mary

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks, Mary. Much appreciated. :)
~Dean

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I thought of doing just this, but I'm glad you did it. I doubt I could get close to the beauty of your poem and it's subtle homage to Brooke and wish to see her return. I am not surprised people are responding so warmly and with such concern. She is the First Lady of FS and her generous heart has touched us all. Congratulations on a wonderful tribute.


Sent from my iPad

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for your comments, mark. They are appreciated.
~Dean

Comment from Walu Feral

Exceptional

G'day Dean. I'm so glad I am am getting you work again mate, this is sensational stuff Sir. The flow, rhymes and rhythm are 100% Perfect and Brooke will love it I'm sure. Cheers and well done Fez

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks you, Fez. I really appreciate you taking time out to read and review this one. I am also very grateful for your generous and exceptional six star rating. I hope you're right, and it manages to brighten Brooke's day a little, if ansd when she gets a chance to read it.
Thanks again, mate. Again, I do appreciate it! :)
~Dean

Comment from justafan

Exceptional

My friend has a very soft side :) This is a splendid poem for Ms Brooke. I am sure she will enjoy this very much. Well done!

Always justafan,
Missy

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thanks very much for reading this nod to Brooke, and for your thoughtful comments and six stars as well, Missy. All are sincerely appreciated. ~Dean

reply by justafan on 02-Jun-2015

Well deserved Dean :)

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Comment from scd41

Excellent

It is an emotiona-filled poem on Brooke' illness. I wish her early recovery. She used to write those wonderful poems for children to teach them counting. You have shared your feelings for her by writing a similar style poem.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks, scd41. Your comments and review are appreciated. ~Dean

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

Brooke is going to love this one dearly as you combine her favorites, dandelions and counting tales. There is no need to mention rhyme or meter since they are flawless as usual. The essence of this piece is filled with light and love and will surely aid in her healing and send her back to us soon. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks, Monica. I appreciate you taking the time to comment and review this poem. ~Dean