Steve's Story-Poems
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I had a little chucjkle along with your clever poem and I can see where all your inspiration came from.
I also take BP medications daily and would rather not but when given the option -risk death or take a tab - there really was no choice.
you have habve done a great job at describing the lead up to , waiting for, and aftermath of a doctor's visit.
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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I had a little chucjkle along with your clever poem and I can see where all your inspiration came from.
I also take BP medications daily and would rather not but when given the option -risk death or take a tab - there really was no choice.
you have habve done a great job at describing the lead up to , waiting for, and aftermath of a doctor's visit.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.
Steve
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Funny, with excellent meter and rhyme. Not funny that your BP needed a chemical adjustment, but good that it's working. Well done as always, Steve. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Funny, with excellent meter and rhyme. Not funny that your BP needed a chemical adjustment, but good that it's working. Well done as always, Steve. :) Nancy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thanks, Nancy - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from mfowler
The Ashes series was lost a few hours ago 5-0 to a rampant Aussie team that may stand a chance of beating the Kiwis if they haven't all retired before a next series is scheduled. Oops I didn't mean to mention it.
Now to your funny-as poem. It reads well off the page and your verses are filled with great gags, both blackout and white. I enjoyed the one about the old lady's near death experience. My favourite verse is the one about the Spiggo-thing. The best thing about it though is the overall impression it leaves of having been thoroughly entertained.
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The Ashes series was lost a few hours ago 5-0 to a rampant Aussie team that may stand a chance of beating the Kiwis if they haven't all retired before a next series is scheduled. Oops I didn't mean to mention it.
Now to your funny-as poem. It reads well off the page and your verses are filled with great gags, both blackout and white. I enjoyed the one about the old lady's near death experience. My favourite verse is the one about the Spiggo-thing. The best thing about it though is the overall impression it leaves of having been thoroughly entertained.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the great review.
As for the cricket, we don't beat you often, but the joy when we do more than makes up for it. Kiwis are building a solid team at the moment but a little inconsistent. Poms were rubbish - South Africans may be a different story.
Steve