All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Colors of Life"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Cool Beans
and I think you just shared why everyone's relationship with Him is different and special and unique!!! Mean mean old old lady. He would never criticize the beautiful circles and I am sure he had outfits in many colors...just sayin' Our spiritual walks often get sidetracked by those who feel they have a better relationship with the big guy upstairs. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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and I think you just shared why everyone's relationship with Him is different and special and unique!!! Mean mean old old lady. He would never criticize the beautiful circles and I am sure he had outfits in many colors...just sayin' Our spiritual walks often get sidetracked by those who feel they have a better relationship with the big guy upstairs. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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thx CB!
Comment from Heaven Bound
This is an amazing writing. Not only in the sense of how you wrote it - well, entertaining, and attention-capturing, but also in the sense of the message you bring. Excellent job. This should do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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This is an amazing writing. Not only in the sense of how you wrote it - well, entertaining, and attention-capturing, but also in the sense of the message you bring. Excellent job. This should do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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thx HB!
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent. What a wonderful writing! So full of 'little girl' chatter but such lovely 'big girl' thoughts! Very original. You mastered this well. And I totally agree -- He doesn't mind at all. He probably longs for more simplicity like this. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Excellent. What a wonderful writing! So full of 'little girl' chatter but such lovely 'big girl' thoughts! Very original. You mastered this well. And I totally agree -- He doesn't mind at all. He probably longs for more simplicity like this. Thanks again.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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thx samsays!
Comment from ennahanid
This is a very entertaining read this evening and i have to say the voice was really terrific and very seven-ish to my way of thinking. I wish you luck - Dinah
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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This is a very entertaining read this evening and i have to say the voice was really terrific and very seven-ish to my way of thinking. I wish you luck - Dinah
Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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thank you Dinah - just posted it a couple of minutes ago - boy, you're fast!
Comment from EMB
This was a cute poem. I don't think I've ever seen a piece of work that puts Jesus and Santa side by side, comparing the two. The girl's perspective was definitely entertaining.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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This was a cute poem. I don't think I've ever seen a piece of work that puts Jesus and Santa side by side, comparing the two. The girl's perspective was definitely entertaining.
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012
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Thx Edward! you were fast - I just put this up a couple of minutes ago!