Interlude
An Idyll Poem85 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
This was a great read. The flow and the rhyme were so natural - I could almost hear music while reading your poem. Thank you for capturing a beautiful slice of life. Lou
This was a great read. The flow and the rhyme were so natural - I could almost hear music while reading your poem. Thank you for capturing a beautiful slice of life. Lou
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
Comment from phattp
You've certainly managed to conjure an idyllic picture with this. I like the gentle tone and feel of happiness that it has. Good luck in the contest. :) P.
You've certainly managed to conjure an idyllic picture with this. I like the gentle tone and feel of happiness that it has. Good luck in the contest. :) P.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
Comment from purrfect tale
A lovely and romantic poem. It answers all the points for an idyll poem. Your description of the plants, colors, and smells of the meadow was idyllic.
A lovely and romantic poem. It answers all the points for an idyll poem. Your description of the plants, colors, and smells of the meadow was idyllic.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
Comment from Teresa Paul
I loved this poem. Makes the reader remember what love is supposed to feel like. Loved the flow. Nothing really to criticize.
I loved this poem. Makes the reader remember what love is supposed to feel like. Loved the flow. Nothing really to criticize.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
Comment from The Stranger
NOW THISD BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED POEM simply ddzes rpmancr from start to finish (sorry asbouy the spelling etc, I took termasxepan last night)
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NOW THISD BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED POEM simply ddzes rpmancr from start to finish (sorry asbouy the spelling etc, I took termasxepan last night)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011