POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from hotstuff
Your love poem is a beautiful tribute to your son Michael.
He looked like a very special little boy judging by the twinkle in his eyes. I am so sorry for your loss. The loss of a child is every mother's nightmare. I hate to think that you have had to endure this loss more than once.
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Your love poem is a beautiful tribute to your son Michael.
He looked like a very special little boy judging by the twinkle in his eyes. I am so sorry for your loss. The loss of a child is every mother's nightmare. I hate to think that you have had to endure this loss more than once.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Hotstuff
That twinkle in his eye is what keeps me going every day. I look at his picture and remember how full of life he was and how he enjoyed liv8ing. Thanks so much for the kind review and the awesome stars as well. Always, CArol
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You are very welcome. Love Pat
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
oh, that certainly pulls at the heart strings. So sad that you lost him so young. Was reading your profile there and seems you've dealt with quite a bit of tragedy. Doesn't really make sense how some have to and others don't. Beautiful short poem.
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oh, that certainly pulls at the heart strings. So sad that you lost him so young. Was reading your profile there and seems you've dealt with quite a bit of tragedy. Doesn't really make sense how some have to and others don't. Beautiful short poem.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Dawn
I have asked myself that question many times throughout life..but there is no rhyme or reason to it. They say God doesn't give us more than we can handle, but sometimes I think we really need to have a long talk. Thanks so much! Carol
Comment from Belinda
So finally you succeeded in downloading this picture! Ah, your Michael is so sweet. No wonder you dedicate this love poem to him. "Our love lives forever." Nothing is more sure than that!
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So finally you succeeded in downloading this picture! Ah, your Michael is so sweet. No wonder you dedicate this love poem to him. "Our love lives forever." Nothing is more sure than that!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Belinda
Everyday I take his picture and that smile lights up my life. I may not have him here but I know he looks down and watches all the time. Thanks so much for your review. CArol
Comment from missy98writer
Begin Again,
Your short Biographical poem to your son was moving. I cried at such well written tribute to your son. If that's a photo of him, he was a beautiful boy with a great smile. The words you wrote are from your soul, a mothers undying love. Bless you and your precious memories. I too had a loss in my life, my sister Tchinina. She died at the age of 29 on May 2, 2009. She left behind a son who was 8, Brandon is now 15. I penned a poem where I say in a line about my sister: "My love for you, my soul sister; Tchinina, is exactly like pure sold gold." The poem was inspired by a song called "Hey Soul Sister" sung by Train. I've yet to post it
I'm giving this wonderful tribute love poem five stars. Good luck on the writing contest. Keep on writing.
Melissa
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Begin Again,
Your short Biographical poem to your son was moving. I cried at such well written tribute to your son. If that's a photo of him, he was a beautiful boy with a great smile. The words you wrote are from your soul, a mothers undying love. Bless you and your precious memories. I too had a loss in my life, my sister Tchinina. She died at the age of 29 on May 2, 2009. She left behind a son who was 8, Brandon is now 15. I penned a poem where I say in a line about my sister: "My love for you, my soul sister; Tchinina, is exactly like pure sold gold." The poem was inspired by a song called "Hey Soul Sister" sung by Train. I've yet to post it
I'm giving this wonderful tribute love poem five stars. Good luck on the writing contest. Keep on writing.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Melissa
Post it! You will feel so much better. Yes the picture is my beautiful son and that smile gives me strength to meet each and every day. Thank you so much. CArol
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I came up with a short poem just now that's kind of similar. I need to submit my love poem in 15 words less.
"To My Soul Sister: Tchinina." (15 Word Poem):
Soul sister, you enlightned my life.
My love for you is like pure solid gold.
Do you think that is a good one to submit for my short love poem?
Melissa.
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That's good or how about...your love is worth more than gold or
your love is pure gold or your love, my pot of gold
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How about this:
Soul sister you enlightned my life.
You're love will always be worth pure solid gold.
Melissa.
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That's good or
Your love, worth more than pure solid gold
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You have the wrong you're in your poem Your is right
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Oops,
Typo:
I should read:
A Tribute to My Soul Sister (15 Word Poem)
Soul sister you enlightned my life. Your love will always be worth pure solid gold.
Melissa.
Thanks for catching that, I have a new computer with windows 7, ny old one bit the dust. Never buy a refurbished computer.
Comment from mountainwriter49
What a beautiful and wonderful poem. I've often felt that the worst thing that could happen to a parent is to loose a child. Thank God, that hasn't happened to me. Your poem is touching and beautiful. I do have one thought for you to consider. I think perhaps the "h" in heaven should be capitalized. Thank you for sharing your poem. M
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What a beautiful and wonderful poem. I've often felt that the worst thing that could happen to a parent is to loose a child. Thank God, that hasn't happened to me. Your poem is touching and beautiful. I do have one thought for you to consider. I think perhaps the "h" in heaven should be capitalized. Thank you for sharing your poem. M
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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M
You are so right...I thought it was but I was crying so much I probably missed it. I appreciate your thoughts. CARol
Comment from ArtGal
I'm so sorry for your loss but like you said, "our love lives forever in precious memories." And I beleive that children do become angels and I'm sure he's always with you, God bless.
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I'm so sorry for your loss but like you said, "our love lives forever in precious memories." And I beleive that children do become angels and I'm sure he's always with you, God bless.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Artgal
I am sure he is with too. Thanks for the wonderful comments and the wishes. TAke care. Carol
Comment from fayesh
Your short love poem was not only endearing, but also filled with the abiding love that exists between a loving parent and child. Nicely done.
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Your short love poem was not only endearing, but also filled with the abiding love that exists between a loving parent and child. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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fayesh
Thank you very much. Even though i don't have him here any more his love will always be in my heart. CArol
Comment from Kathy58
Begin Again. First off, I love your user I.D. name. It is awesome. This short poem is just heart-wrenching to me. I cannot imagine losing my son or daughter. I am so sorry. I just lost my brother-in-law, in the wee hours of this morning. It is tough, but he was very sick in the end and now in a much better place and out of pain now. I posted a new poem in his memory this morning. It already got 2 reviews, so I am reviewing away to make member dollars to put a certificate on it, thanks for shring, kathy58
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Begin Again. First off, I love your user I.D. name. It is awesome. This short poem is just heart-wrenching to me. I cannot imagine losing my son or daughter. I am so sorry. I just lost my brother-in-law, in the wee hours of this morning. It is tough, but he was very sick in the end and now in a much better place and out of pain now. I posted a new poem in his memory this morning. It already got 2 reviews, so I am reviewing away to make member dollars to put a certificate on it, thanks for shring, kathy58
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Kathy
My condolences to you and your family. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. CArol
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Begin Again,
This poem reads and flows well and I have no suggestion for improvement. Lucky is the one who has an Angel from Heaven to love ... now and forever.
Regards, LateBloomer
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Hello Begin Again,
This poem reads and flows well and I have no suggestion for improvement. Lucky is the one who has an Angel from Heaven to love ... now and forever.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Latebloomer
He had greater plans doing God's work than he did here on earth. His smile llives with me every day. CArol
Comment from Writeaway...
Excellent conttest entry Begin Again, I was blown away by your imagination and creativity. The backgorund and the picture also blended in well excellent job once again and keep writing.
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Excellent conttest entry Begin Again, I was blown away by your imagination and creativity. The backgorund and the picture also blended in well excellent job once again and keep writing.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Jake
He was a wonderful little boy who had greater plans in Heaven than here on earth. Thank you. CArol