lavender
haiku81 total reviews
Comment from LovnPeace
Lovely, both picture and poem. It is a great contender in the contest. Good luck in the contest. I like the play on words in the end. Double meaning, Clesver. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Lovely, both picture and poem. It is a great contender in the contest. Good luck in the contest. I like the play on words in the end. Double meaning, Clesver. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Barbara for your encouraging and generous sixth star review. I always appreciate hearing from you and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write and to remember those lavender fields.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you chose for your poem
I image the scent floating in the cool breezes for a season
I glad some one bottle it up I use scented lotion for my body and have the powder and perfume to match. I even have Laverne room spray.
Thank you for sharing.
Cooke
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I love the artwork you chose for your poem
I image the scent floating in the cool breezes for a season
I glad some one bottle it up I use scented lotion for my body and have the powder and perfume to match. I even have Laverne room spray.
Thank you for sharing.
Cooke
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Cookie for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
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You're very welcome and it was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from Ogden
A very cleverly fashioned haiku, with a masterpiece pun (mistresspiece?) for a satori!
Brava, Janet!
Don
(The FS system insists the review needs an additional forty-four characters, so this should be enough to satisfy the mindless thing.)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A very cleverly fashioned haiku, with a masterpiece pun (mistresspiece?) for a satori!
Brava, Janet!
Don
(The FS system insists the review needs an additional forty-four characters, so this should be enough to satisfy the mindless thing.)
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Don for your encouraging and generous sixth star review. I always appreciate hearing from you and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write and remember those lavender fields.
It is hard to write 44 characters for short poems - so happy that you did.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
What a very clever haiku, thisvisca would call a real haiku, with a real aha moment, the artwork is superb, this is probably the most accomplished entry I've seen, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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What a very clever haiku, thisvisca would call a real haiku, with a real aha moment, the artwork is superb, this is probably the most accomplished entry I've seen, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Roy for your most encouraging and generous sixth star review. I always appreciate hearing from you and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one. It is an honor to get one of your six stars. Your reviews always lift my spirits.
It was fun to write this one and to remember those lavender fields.
Blessings
Janet
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Well earned Janet
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did a good job with this word play. The image you chose is stunning and you paired your words well. That Roma therapy would certainly work well! Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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You did a good job with this word play. The image you chose is stunning and you paired your words well. That Roma therapy would certainly work well! Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Louise for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about lavender fields all over Italy and the lovely aroma that hangs in the air wherever the lavender are found. My favorite choice as well.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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A very well-written haiku about lavender fields all over Italy and the lovely aroma that hangs in the air wherever the lavender are found. My favorite choice as well.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Michele Harber
What a charming poem, and what a lovely an unexpected pun. I'm not used to seeing puns used in Haiku, but you definitely made this work. Your lines flow smoothly into one another and, of course, the picture is the perfect enhancement.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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What a charming poem, and what a lovely an unexpected pun. I'm not used to seeing puns used in Haiku, but you definitely made this work. Your lines flow smoothly into one another and, of course, the picture is the perfect enhancement.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Michele for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
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You're very welcome, Janet, and blessings to you as well.
Comment from kiwijenny
I LOVE THIS...I love puns and a Roma therapy is so cool
Lavender fields of lavender are my favorite too
Blossoms under Italian skies
Awesome
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I LOVE THIS...I love puns and a Roma therapy is so cool
Lavender fields of lavender are my favorite too
Blossoms under Italian skies
Awesome
God bless
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from susand3022
Hello JMF, A purple, and humorous Haiku! I think your word-play is really cute, a-Roma-therapy... lol very good. I do love Lilac, one of my favorite scents. (Did you know that the oil will all but eliminate a new burn? Keep it in the kitchen!) Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hello JMF, A purple, and humorous Haiku! I think your word-play is really cute, a-Roma-therapy... lol very good. I do love Lilac, one of my favorite scents. (Did you know that the oil will all but eliminate a new burn? Keep it in the kitchen!) Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Susan for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it.
I didn't know that the oil would help with a new burn. I will keep that in mind. Thanks
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I had to tear myself away from the beautiful artwork. The poem is just as lovely. You have used all of your syllables effectively to create a descriptive, clever haiku!
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I had to tear myself away from the beautiful artwork. The poem is just as lovely. You have used all of your syllables effectively to create a descriptive, clever haiku!
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Janice for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased to hear from you and extra pleased that you enjoyed it. Lavender is a stunning plant to see.
Blessings
Janet