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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "African Wind"possible selections for inclusion in book project
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Comment from Taffspride
Beautiful Mikey, dare I say you are so multi talented, just when I think I have seen the best, you come up with something like this poem.
It is music itself. even without the audio. Then I read it aloud along with the music it was even better.
music is all around us, even if there is none playing it's in the rustle of leaves in the breeze, the sweet song of the birds, the crescendo of the ocean as the waves crash to the shore.
If we close our eyes she is always there.
African wind, it is rare. Super words.
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece Mikey.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Beautiful Mikey, dare I say you are so multi talented, just when I think I have seen the best, you come up with something like this poem.
It is music itself. even without the audio. Then I read it aloud along with the music it was even better.
music is all around us, even if there is none playing it's in the rustle of leaves in the breeze, the sweet song of the birds, the crescendo of the ocean as the waves crash to the shore.
If we close our eyes she is always there.
African wind, it is rare. Super words.
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece Mikey.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Yes. What you say about music is so very true.. Very beautifully put. Wow. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this so much. I've never written something while listening to music before. I think I may do so again. :)) I love this song and this is what came out when I was listening to it. I kind of like it to. :)) mikey
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you are welcome Mikey. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just a major beauty of a poem, Mav. It looks like you have a bit of an artistic bent to your nature as well. The black and white colour choice is wonderful to match the black and white keys on a piano. Don't you just love it when music comes together like that?
I love Enya. She is an incredible musician so your music choice is sublime as well.
Gorgeous all the way. I wish you all the best in the contest. This is a strong contender.
Ange
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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This is just a major beauty of a poem, Mav. It looks like you have a bit of an artistic bent to your nature as well. The black and white colour choice is wonderful to match the black and white keys on a piano. Don't you just love it when music comes together like that?
I love Enya. She is an incredible musician so your music choice is sublime as well.
Gorgeous all the way. I wish you all the best in the contest. This is a strong contender.
Ange
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Thanks, Ange. It's getting the skills to let the bent shine through if I do have them. I think this is the only time I ever wrote words to music I was listening to. Maybe I shall again. She is awesome. This is one of my favorite songs actually, go figure. You're too kind. Mav
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Mikey(*<*)
= This is an awesome write, presentation, video entry for the contest.
= Love the creative flow of your words, the perfect love poem.
= Good luck in the contest.
=::= A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! =::=
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
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reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Hi, Mikey(*<*)
= This is an awesome write, presentation, video entry for the contest.
= Love the creative flow of your words, the perfect love poem.
= Good luck in the contest.
=::= A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! =::=
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
=::= Feel free to visit my profile on Amazon.com =::=
amazon.com/author/jacquelinefranklin
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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How wonderful to hear. Gee. I couldn't be more pleased that you enjoyed. Wow. I'm smiling, right side up. mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Oh my. This made me cry. Hwo beautiful. It does belong with the music. Yes, I hear the piano throughout. Michael, this is so you. A gem. NG
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Oh my. This made me cry. Hwo beautiful. It does belong with the music. Yes, I hear the piano throughout. Michael, this is so you. A gem. NG
Comment Written 18-May-2016
reply by the author on 19-May-2016
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Aww. How sweet. I doubt anyone would think this is me. LOL
More of a rhinestone, dear girl. michael