All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this poem makes me happy, too. The imagery presented within is just stellar. I love the way you descrined the shades of blue. I truly enjoyed the moment living in your words.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Wow, this poem makes me happy, too. The imagery presented within is just stellar. I love the way you descrined the shades of blue. I truly enjoyed the moment living in your words.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Glad to know it's catching! :)Sharyn
Comment from CR Delport
Yes, everyone has their own things that make them happy. Some more complicated than others. Thank you for sharing yours in this wonderful poem. Love the art work.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Yes, everyone has their own things that make them happy. Some more complicated than others. Thank you for sharing yours in this wonderful poem. Love the art work.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thx so much CR! :)S
Comment from Mrs Jones
You certainly have spread joy with your words. It can be felt in this verse. In some places your line breaks can be improved but that is just me...I have a thing about line breaks. LOL
Well done
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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You certainly have spread joy with your words. It can be felt in this verse. In some places your line breaks can be improved but that is just me...I have a thing about line breaks. LOL
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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So funny, Rose - I had to laugh, because the review that followed yours said how intelligently my line lengths were chosen - as you said, each to his own ... and yes, they could indeed be varied a little, according to one's personal interpretation. :)Sharyn
Comment from sgalletti
Well, I asolutely love this poem Sharyn! It makes ME happy to read it. Coffee in bed, gorgeous scenery by the ocean/sea, and fabulous imagery you brought to life so beautifully through your use of multiple poetic devices in this free verse poem. What's not to love? I especially appreciated how intelligently you chose your line lengths and pauses. Delightful read! Hugs, Sue
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Well, I asolutely love this poem Sharyn! It makes ME happy to read it. Coffee in bed, gorgeous scenery by the ocean/sea, and fabulous imagery you brought to life so beautifully through your use of multiple poetic devices in this free verse poem. What's not to love? I especially appreciated how intelligently you chose your line lengths and pauses. Delightful read! Hugs, Sue
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Glad you got a kick out of this one Sue! :)Sharyn
Comment from TonyCr
Well you have stunned me with great images , i live the last stanza and the finish is perfect. I will look on the day anew because of you, great
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Well you have stunned me with great images , i live the last stanza and the finish is perfect. I will look on the day anew because of you, great
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Tony - again, my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from God's Writer
A beautiful poem my dear one. You make me cry as I long for that type of relationship and her finally arriving later this year. So sweet and awesome this poem. So simple and beautiful in its simple heart felt love. Thank you
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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A beautiful poem my dear one. You make me cry as I long for that type of relationship and her finally arriving later this year. So sweet and awesome this poem. So simple and beautiful in its simple heart felt love. Thank you
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Bless you, Erick. Someone's arriving for you later this year? Oh I DO indeed hope so!!! Thank you for your lovely six on this one - and I'm with you all the way here.
:)Sharyn
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You're welcome little butterfly.
Comment from softlyfalling
You have a gift of simpatico and dialectal delivery. This ingenuousness keeps the poem from descending into Hallmark card vernacular. Repeated references and articulated questions are not easy to pull off, but this poem is successful.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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You have a gift of simpatico and dialectal delivery. This ingenuousness keeps the poem from descending into Hallmark card vernacular. Repeated references and articulated questions are not easy to pull off, but this poem is successful.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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If it sounds like a Hallmark card I immediately burn it my dear, no worries! :)S
Comment from Hollyhock
Another gorgeous paean of praise for life.
You are right, it is the little things which give us joy if we take the time to notice.
I like the shape of this poem. It begins slowly with your sensual awakening and then from the "wind's curve of highway" gathers pace as if you are driving free along the shoreline with the day at your feet.
Very uplifting.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Another gorgeous paean of praise for life.
You are right, it is the little things which give us joy if we take the time to notice.
I like the shape of this poem. It begins slowly with your sensual awakening and then from the "wind's curve of highway" gathers pace as if you are driving free along the shoreline with the day at your feet.
Very uplifting.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thx so much Andrea - keep an eye out for my new one - totally "formal" (but rather funny, if I do say so myself).
:)S
Comment from beccabootie123
your writing is always so intense yet calming at the same time. well penned and flows easily. smooth to read and really enjoyed.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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your writing is always so intense yet calming at the same time. well penned and flows easily. smooth to read and really enjoyed.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much Becca - bless you and be happy too my dear.
:)S
Comment from pbroussard209
What a feel good poem I enjoyed reading it even though today is overcast and gray it makes me think of two days ago with my son and his dog playing in the back yard exploring the over growth and the sun glinting off his blond hair. I love the magic child part as parents are children are magic.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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What a feel good poem I enjoyed reading it even though today is overcast and gray it makes me think of two days ago with my son and his dog playing in the back yard exploring the over growth and the sun glinting off his blond hair. I love the magic child part as parents are children are magic.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Bless you for your magic 'six' on this one my dear - isn't it funny how little it takes sometimes, to find the magic in our day?
:)Sharyn
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Your welcome and the sun came out and my 5 year old son is outside right now with his rubber boots finding mud puddles to stomp in with our Lab helping him out. They are both going to need a bath tonight. Lol
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How lovely just to watch that innocence, yes? And soap & water are cheap, thank goodness! :))