All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Pineapple Paradise?"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
75 total reviews
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
What a clever way to express your poem I its lovely and colourful and you describe your feelings well in the words of the poem. Thanks for sharing with me.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
  |
What a clever way to express your poem I its lovely and colourful and you describe your feelings well in the words of the poem. Thanks for sharing with me.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
-
thx Mary Ann! :) Sharyn
Comment from cvcopac
Another ingenious message. This time wrapped around the the states prized fruit. I like your electric verse; it lights up neon flashing lights for me. Reminds me a bit of Florida too, minus the pineapple, of course. Good luck in the contest. cvc
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
|
Another ingenious message. This time wrapped around the the states prized fruit. I like your electric verse; it lights up neon flashing lights for me. Reminds me a bit of Florida too, minus the pineapple, of course. Good luck in the contest. cvc
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
-
thx so much cvc! :) Sharyn
Comment from Humbly K
I enjoyed reading this poem. Great descriptions and good use of words to create imagery and feelings. I also liked the occasional rhymes which flowed nicely.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
|
I enjoyed reading this poem. Great descriptions and good use of words to create imagery and feelings. I also liked the occasional rhymes which flowed nicely.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
-
thx so much HK!! :) Sharyn
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi S, I got right into this abstract;you had me in, loved the sarcasm,loved the topics you chose, loved the way it was written and love your smile. Kindest wishes James xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
 |
Hi S, I got right into this abstract;you had me in, loved the sarcasm,loved the topics you chose, loved the way it was written and love your smile. Kindest wishes James xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
-
James, you've made my night! I wasn't sure if this one was going to fly or not, as the prompt was a little difficult to interpret (actually drove me nuts) ... but actually ended up being rather fun, watching the way one's convoluted mind can work!!! Blessings for your magic 6!!! I do so appreciate it.
Best wishes & warmest "mahalo"
Sharyn
Comment from Curly Girly
Wow! I think you did an awsome job of this one. You took a pineapple and made a mountain. Some interesting perspectives here. Well done. CG
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
|
Wow! I think you did an awsome job of this one. You took a pineapple and made a mountain. Some interesting perspectives here. Well done. CG
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
-
Wow! CG I'm thrilled! you're my first review and I was truly wondering if I'd get creamed on this one as it was such a challenging prompt! Bless you for your magic '6'!!! Now I can go to bed happy!!! Much much MAHALO!!! :))))))))))Sharyn
-
You're welcome. Good night!