POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Helvi2
Hi Begin Again,
What a lovely poem of love for your son. I am saddened to know he is no longer with you, but happy you are comforted by the precious memories you had.
I love the picture you included...that is a face anyone could love.
Blessings,
Helvi :o)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Hi Begin Again,
What a lovely poem of love for your son. I am saddened to know he is no longer with you, but happy you are comforted by the precious memories you had.
I love the picture you included...that is a face anyone could love.
Blessings,
Helvi :o)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Helvi
He had an angelic face from the moment he was born with the curiousity of a mischievious boy. i was blessed to have had him. Thank you so much. Smiles, CArol
Comment from Laidy
so very true. i loved this poem and felt so close to these words. i thought you wrote this well and with great emotion. lovely
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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so very true. i loved this poem and felt so close to these words. i thought you wrote this well and with great emotion. lovely
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Laidy
Thank you for sharing Michael and the love he graced the world with. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sarabran
That is the greatest gift that you can receive from a child. A great gift for a mother. I liked your poem a lot. You said a lot in only a few words. Sarabran :)
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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That is the greatest gift that you can receive from a child. A great gift for a mother. I liked your poem a lot. You said a lot in only a few words. Sarabran :)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Sara
I was blessed to have him for four years and his love touches me everyday. Thank you. CArol
Comment from Nicnac
And what a beautiful gift!
I'm so blessed by reading this, Carol. The love you carry for your precious son is conveyed so sweetly. What a beautiful boy.
Blessings and hugs, my friend.
Nic
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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And what a beautiful gift!
I'm so blessed by reading this, Carol. The love you carry for your precious son is conveyed so sweetly. What a beautiful boy.
Blessings and hugs, my friend.
Nic
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Nic
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my poem. The response has been overwhelming this morning and I think my son would be smiling. He sent another gift to his mom. Thank kyou. CArol
Comment from dportwood
Begin Again,
This message from your heart is a strong expression of love. These fifteen words portray what love is all about. Well done and good luck.
Duane
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2009
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Begin Again,
This message from your heart is a strong expression of love. These fifteen words portray what love is all about. Well done and good luck.
Duane
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Duane
It was easy. I was blessed to have had Michael for those short years and his love is very special. Smiles, CArol
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
This poem expresses something good to have emblazoned on the soul.
Of course nothing, but nothing, can substitute for this love of mother for a child.
You express a lot in so few words, and I guess that's the idea of the entry criteria.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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This poem expresses something good to have emblazoned on the soul.
Of course nothing, but nothing, can substitute for this love of mother for a child.
You express a lot in so few words, and I guess that's the idea of the entry criteria.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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stumbly
He was and will remain the joy of my heart forever. I may have only had him on earth for four years but he lives in my heart forever. Thank you Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Carol,
I must say this must of been a very difficult Love poem to write about your wonderful looking and he semmed to be such a happy boy..
Good luck to you in this contest
Love
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Hello Carol,
I must say this must of been a very difficult Love poem to write about your wonderful looking and he semmed to be such a happy boy..
Good luck to you in this contest
Love
Gert
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Gert
He was happy all the time. I believe God loaned me his angel for a few years and then had bigger plans for him. Thank you Carol
Carol,
Please take care.
Gert
Comment from tati
Dear Carol,
You're very right. Children are God's gift. In so few words, you crafted an exquisite love poem to Michael, your angel in heaven. So touching, written from your wonderful heart, with two beautiful alliterations. This is a perfect Short Love Poem entry. Good luck in the contest. (tati, Nov. 03, 2009)
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Dear Carol,
You're very right. Children are God's gift. In so few words, you crafted an exquisite love poem to Michael, your angel in heaven. So touching, written from your wonderful heart, with two beautiful alliterations. This is a perfect Short Love Poem entry. Good luck in the contest. (tati, Nov. 03, 2009)
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Tati
How kind of you to offer such a beautiful review and the awesome stars. They match the twinkle in his eye. I miss him more than life itself. Thank you...Carol
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Wish you're here so I can hug you, Carol. With much love and prayers, tati.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I want to let you know I just fell in love with the most adorable little blonde boy with a captivating smile. The poem wasn't bad either. Good job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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I want to let you know I just fell in love with the most adorable little blonde boy with a captivating smile. The poem wasn't bad either. Good job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
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Barbara
No greater compliment could you have given me. He stole my heart away. Thanks for reading my love poem. CArol
Comment from Oatmeal
Begin Again,
The impressions were vivid and the narration was nice. All of the lines are formatted very well. The theme was well thought out.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Begin Again,
The impressions were vivid and the narration was nice. All of the lines are formatted very well. The theme was well thought out.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 02-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2009
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Oatmeal
Thank you for your kind and appreciated comments. CArol