Chip's Poetry
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102 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
Oh, I really liked this one. It flowed incredibly well while also emitting an important message that we should all take to heart. Great job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Oh, I really liked this one. It flowed incredibly well while also emitting an important message that we should all take to heart. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much for the kind words and generous rating, Chloe!
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem contest entry. We all feel discomfort in some cases. I think it is a part of life. I like this poem. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Excellent poem contest entry. We all feel discomfort in some cases. I think it is a part of life. I like this poem. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from royowen
It's written that faith and fear are the opposite ends of the spectrum, fear imprisones, but faith releases, well done, this is an excellent post and entry in this four line poetry contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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It's written that faith and fear are the opposite ends of the spectrum, fear imprisones, but faith releases, well done, this is an excellent post and entry in this four line poetry contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks again, Roy!
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My pleasure
Comment from victor 66
A Philosophy of life that is well written with a few short words. Some people know it, some people don't, that your life is always living on the edge. Sometimes it's by choice and other times it's just happenstance. Very thought-provoking poem, that you have here. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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A Philosophy of life that is well written with a few short words. Some people know it, some people don't, that your life is always living on the edge. Sometimes it's by choice and other times it's just happenstance. Very thought-provoking poem, that you have here. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Many thanks, Victor!
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You're most welcome, Chip.
Comment from Ja Majal
After reading this I feel like I can do whatever I set my mind too, nothing is impossible. As long as I don't give up or let my thoughts restrict me, everything possible is within my grasp!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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After reading this I feel like I can do whatever I set my mind too, nothing is impossible. As long as I don't give up or let my thoughts restrict me, everything possible is within my grasp!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Right on, Jamal, I agree!
Comment from l.raven
HI Chip, easier said then done...I used to
love to fly...and then my kids were born...
and now I would never go up in a plan...
I love the spirit in your poem my sweet friend...
reach for the skies...very well written...and your
picture...perfect...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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HI Chip, easier said then done...I used to
love to fly...and then my kids were born...
and now I would never go up in a plan...
I love the spirit in your poem my sweet friend...
reach for the skies...very well written...and your
picture...perfect...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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I suspect you've done some things since your kids were born that you might have had trepidation about prior, no? Thanks for the kind review, Linda!
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I think I became more aware of my life...and theirs...if something happen to me...they wouldn't have me...where would that leave them???...now they are older...you would think flying wouldn't be a problem...but what if something happen to my kids...God forbid...what would my grandkids do...they count on me...and with that...I would like to be the one to be in control of my life....in the matter of life or death...otherwise...the kids control me...or they think they do...LOL...you are so welcome Chip...xxoo
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Chip Kuzborski Good rhyming thought and an excellent suggestion for each of us today here on fanstory
to remember to-
tread
beyond (our) comfort's edge
tiptoe on the ledge with (confidence)
stomp on your fear and dance when it's dead
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Hello Chip Kuzborski Good rhyming thought and an excellent suggestion for each of us today here on fanstory
to remember to-
tread
beyond (our) comfort's edge
tiptoe on the ledge with (confidence)
stomp on your fear and dance when it's dead
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Gert!
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You are welcome.
Gert
Comment from nomi338
The best way to face the future is on the corpse of yesterday's fear. Once you have faced and conquered the things that you once were afraid of, you will laugh at how silly your fears were in the first place.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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The best way to face the future is on the corpse of yesterday's fear. Once you have faced and conquered the things that you once were afraid of, you will laugh at how silly your fears were in the first place.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Well said, Nomi!
Comment from June Sargent
Great words to live by captured in just a few short lines. It's never easy to step out of our comfort zone. But with courage and determination, we can beat our fears to reach greater heights. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Great words to live by captured in just a few short lines. It's never easy to step out of our comfort zone. But with courage and determination, we can beat our fears to reach greater heights. Well done.
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you, June.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short, inspiration and perfectly illustrated poem about fighting and conquering your fear and enjoying life.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing/
~Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This is a short, inspiration and perfectly illustrated poem about fighting and conquering your fear and enjoying life.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing/
~Joan
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Joan!
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No problem.
Joan
