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Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write, a heartfelt soliloquy that not only stikes at the heart of humanity, but also defends it in its relationship to the Creator somewhat disturbing, but also cautionary and instructive in easy and fluid free verse...
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In my opinion, a stunning write, a heartfelt soliloquy that not only stikes at the heart of humanity, but also defends it in its relationship to the Creator somewhat disturbing, but also cautionary and instructive in easy and fluid free verse...
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A well written acrostic poem with a clear message. The poem flowed nicely in free verse. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
In second stanza, Lot of people...â?? probably should be â??Lotsâ??.
â??Knottily is not a word. Did you mean â??naughtily â???
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A well written acrostic poem with a clear message. The poem flowed nicely in free verse. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
In second stanza, Lot of people...â?? probably should be â??Lotsâ??.
â??Knottily is not a word. Did you mean â??naughtily â???
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Josh Walters
This is an impressively long title to meet the requirements of the contest. Well written and certainly meets the criteria. Best luck in the contest!
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This is an impressively long title to meet the requirements of the contest. Well written and certainly meets the criteria. Best luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Alcreator Litt Dear... Good luck in yourn Acrostic Free Verse Poem Contest. Thanks so much for a unique and interesting point of view and read... your, di
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Hey Alcreator Litt Dear... Good luck in yourn Acrostic Free Verse Poem Contest. Thanks so much for a unique and interesting point of view and read... your, di
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is beautifully penned. It is both inspiring and profound in content. The biggest part of faith is the understanding that we are not meant to "know" - we are meant to trust. We are not meant to waste - we are meant to love. We are not meant to be separate - we are meant to be one. You express it all eloquently. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This is beautifully penned. It is both inspiring and profound in content. The biggest part of faith is the understanding that we are not meant to "know" - we are meant to trust. We are not meant to waste - we are meant to love. We are not meant to be separate - we are meant to be one. You express it all eloquently. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from rjuselius
this is an insightful piece of spiritual poetry dear alcreator! I am overwhelmed by the depth you put in your poem. it is not only sunshine and starry skies.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
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this is an insightful piece of spiritual poetry dear alcreator! I am overwhelmed by the depth you put in your poem. it is not only sunshine and starry skies.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from royowen
Why men find fault with God,whenHe is to blame for nothing, although,starting with Adam,who was the first to accuse God,of wrongdoing when he blamed God for giving him Eve,who led him to sin, when it was Adam's decision to disobey God.and men have been doing it since. Well done,a great acrostic,lesssings, Roy
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Why men find fault with God,whenHe is to blame for nothing, although,starting with Adam,who was the first to accuse God,of wrongdoing when he blamed God for giving him Eve,who led him to sin, when it was Adam's decision to disobey God.and men have been doing it since. Well done,a great acrostic,lesssings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
It is obvious you love Acrostic and I like it you uphold and stick to your own style! With free verse and Acrostic (I love free verse), it gives the freedom to create in your personal, customized manner. Not all may get it, but it will mean so very much more to YOU! :) This is lovely with the art you have chosen. I often do not review religious poetry, only because I do not feel qualifed to do so, but this is quite lovely and flowing. Great job and Good Luck!
Wendy
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It is obvious you love Acrostic and I like it you uphold and stick to your own style! With free verse and Acrostic (I love free verse), it gives the freedom to create in your personal, customized manner. Not all may get it, but it will mean so very much more to YOU! :) This is lovely with the art you have chosen. I often do not review religious poetry, only because I do not feel qualifed to do so, but this is quite lovely and flowing. Great job and Good Luck!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem And I found it to be a very interesting read
there were some things I didn't know
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem And I found it to be a very interesting read
there were some things I didn't know
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
Many people say that God is not active in this day and age, but I don't believe that. I think He still answers prayers. But sometimes the answers come later than we want and sometimes the answers are no. This was interesting. Thanks and good luck!
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ALD,
Many people say that God is not active in this day and age, but I don't believe that. I think He still answers prayers. But sometimes the answers come later than we want and sometimes the answers are no. This was interesting. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019