God Speaks
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Comment from Heather Knight
It is true that very often we 'use' God as a last resort. It's also true that we blame him for our own errors. Very interesting poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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It is true that very often we 'use' God as a last resort. It's also true that we blame him for our own errors. Very interesting poem.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
An excellent message in your well written acrostic poem written in your unique style.
Perfect artwork that your have chosen to compliment your work.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
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An excellent message in your well written acrostic poem written in your unique style.
Perfect artwork that your have chosen to compliment your work.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Dean Kuch
We can pray to God wherever we like and whenever we please, DR ALCREATOR.
We do tend to blame God when some catastrophe befalls us, or when illness strikes us or a beloved member of our family down.
"Why did God allow this to happen to me," we'll cry?
As God tested the faithfulness of Job to prove a point to Satan, so too will He sometimes test us.
But like Job, if we can remain faithful and true to Him, we'll will reap our losses back ten-fold.
Best of luck to you in the Write an Acrostic Poem contest you've created.
~Dean
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We can pray to God wherever we like and whenever we please, DR ALCREATOR.
We do tend to blame God when some catastrophe befalls us, or when illness strikes us or a beloved member of our family down.
"Why did God allow this to happen to me," we'll cry?
As God tested the faithfulness of Job to prove a point to Satan, so too will He sometimes test us.
But like Job, if we can remain faithful and true to Him, we'll will reap our losses back ten-fold.
Best of luck to you in the Write an Acrostic Poem contest you've created.
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from tbacha58
Teach us how to avoid and control crime, and maintain peace in life here
Only, guide us how to promote human values, and live mortally immortal
Do teach us how, why and where we should live as man and not as God
About God, help us remove our false, fake, fictional faith and misconceptions
You teach us God's words about living a life that God ever appreciates
I just love your poems, I remember you from before, you always gave me the message about Jesus that I adore. Beautiful and good luck for the win. I am sure. Terry xoxo
I offer you my six so much deserved.
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Teach us how to avoid and control crime, and maintain peace in life here
Only, guide us how to promote human values, and live mortally immortal
Do teach us how, why and where we should live as man and not as God
About God, help us remove our false, fake, fictional faith and misconceptions
You teach us God's words about living a life that God ever appreciates
I just love your poems, I remember you from before, you always gave me the message about Jesus that I adore. Beautiful and good luck for the win. I am sure. Terry xoxo
I offer you my six so much deserved.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from Denise J Tidwell
This is really the most beautiful thing I have ever ever read I'm so deeply impressed with every word and thought PLEASE HELP ME with your incredible journey of Love with paper and words!!!
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This is really the most beautiful thing I have ever ever read I'm so deeply impressed with every word and thought PLEASE HELP ME with your incredible journey of Love with paper and words!!!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2019
Comment from susand3022
Hello Al Creator Litt Dear, Your Acrostic came out very well indeed. I can see that you are in the top running for first place, at least you were when I voted in the contest. Best of luck!
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Hello Al Creator Litt Dear, Your Acrostic came out very well indeed. I can see that you are in the top running for first place, at least you were when I voted in the contest. Best of luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Another interesting poem in your unique style. The requirements for the contest were very specific and you did control the poem to conform.
Wishing you luck in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
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Hi there,
Another interesting poem in your unique style. The requirements for the contest were very specific and you did control the poem to conform.
Wishing you luck in the contest,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a REMARKABLE piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of Acrostic Poem, meeting all the desired norms, and having laudable philosophical depth.
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with a worth following message.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Style and Presentation - something different, but praiseworthy.
'Be better than the best, if not, be different from the rest.'
Best of Luck!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a REMARKABLE piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of Acrostic Poem, meeting all the desired norms, and having laudable philosophical depth.
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, spontaneous, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with a worth following message.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Style and Presentation - something different, but praiseworthy.
'Be better than the best, if not, be different from the rest.'
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Alcreator,
That is a lovely picture. Your lines are a little long which made it tricky to figure out the acrostic words, but I figured it out. I think you have met all the requirements for this contest. Nice message too.
Joy xx
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Hello Alcreator,
That is a lovely picture. Your lines are a little long which made it tricky to figure out the acrostic words, but I figured it out. I think you have met all the requirements for this contest. Nice message too.
Joy xx
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
Comment from meeshu
first it is an ambitious Acrostic poem. it is so well written the average reader may not notice the acrostic vertical sentence. it reads like a very fine sermon. very well done, Alcreator....................meeshu
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first it is an ambitious Acrostic poem. it is so well written the average reader may not notice the acrostic vertical sentence. it reads like a very fine sermon. very well done, Alcreator....................meeshu
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
