What You Express That's Your Base
A 4 Line Poem; You're sum of words, scribe and or expression133 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
You write some very poignant poetry, my friend. do you have aname I can use besides the rather long one you are using? so much easier to respond and connect with a given name. Hope you understand my meaning. Bob
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You write some very poignant poetry, my friend. do you have aname I can use besides the rather long one you are using? so much easier to respond and connect with a given name. Hope you understand my meaning. Bob
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Donka Kristeva
The question of the art work may be interpreted (by the world) as arrogance, but Galatians 3:26 says that we are the children of God by faith in Christ... Your poem is a reminder that by faith we express "the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen" Heb. 11:1. And we receive the Word as our foundation by faith, by revelation.
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The question of the art work may be interpreted (by the world) as arrogance, but Galatians 3:26 says that we are the children of God by faith in Christ... Your poem is a reminder that by faith we express "the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen" Heb. 11:1. And we receive the Word as our foundation by faith, by revelation.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This short verse encourages us to use our time wisely and to speak before we leave this world. Expression is important and not to be neglected. Good job on this poem.
Melissa
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This short verse encourages us to use our time wisely and to speak before we leave this world. Expression is important and not to be neglected. Good job on this poem.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, our sum is all of this as what we do, say, or write is what we will leave behind and be remembered for, a wonderful short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, our sum is all of this as what we do, say, or write is what we will leave behind and be remembered for, a wonderful short work, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Zue65
Yer I agree whatever you write is an extension of the mind and personality of the writer. What you express exposes what you are as a person. I believe that the words also reveals what is in your heart. Thanks for sharing.
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Yer I agree whatever you write is an extension of the mind and personality of the writer. What you express exposes what you are as a person. I believe that the words also reveals what is in your heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from country ranch writer
It is who you are that what makes you keepgiving your honest opinion about something.great wrk up for your poem good luck in the contest and keep up the good work
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It is who you are that what makes you keepgiving your honest opinion about something.great wrk up for your poem good luck in the contest and keep up the good work
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from susand3022
Truer words were never...written. Well, almost. The funny thing about it is that the things people remember are the things that you want them to forget! So, it's not always the sum of what you speak, though you wish it was. Susan
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Truer words were never...written. Well, almost. The funny thing about it is that the things people remember are the things that you want them to forget! So, it's not always the sum of what you speak, though you wish it was. Susan
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Anntonette
You expressed your conciousness within this piece. Think before you act. Are you a thinker or a doer?
Some people just love the action. This piece is where you have to think to get what the big theme is. You are sending a message here.
- Anntonette J
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You expressed your conciousness within this piece. Think before you act. Are you a thinker or a doer?
Some people just love the action. This piece is where you have to think to get what the big theme is. You are sending a message here.
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 24-Nov-2018
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Alcreator Litt Dear
I saw that you did really well with your prompt poem about don't write or speak until you think before you act.
It would be a good to think about.
Gert
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Smiles Alcreator Litt Dear
I saw that you did really well with your prompt poem about don't write or speak until you think before you act.
It would be a good to think about.
Gert
Comment Written 01-Oct-2018
Comment from Boogienights
I agree that we are all made up of what we say, do and write before( I'm assuming you mean to face God) go. We have a responsibility to conduct ourselves in such a way as to be worthy of meeting the creator. It's important to note however, that once there God will forgive our transgressions if we ask. Isn't that a lovely thought. Thanks for this thoughtful poem.
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I agree that we are all made up of what we say, do and write before( I'm assuming you mean to face God) go. We have a responsibility to conduct ourselves in such a way as to be worthy of meeting the creator. It's important to note however, that once there God will forgive our transgressions if we ask. Isn't that a lovely thought. Thanks for this thoughtful poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2018