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Comment from Sugarray77
This is very lovely, Earl. Your rhyming is good and the quick pace keeps our attention. Your theme was well presented and had a logical point. Have a lovely day.
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This is very lovely, Earl. Your rhyming is good and the quick pace keeps our attention. Your theme was well presented and had a logical point. Have a lovely day.
Melissa
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thabk you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem reminds us that we can return to the simple faith of a child after
making our mistakes to become the person we were meant to be and still make
it to the final destination we all wish to see.
Good luck and keep writng
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This poem reminds us that we can return to the simple faith of a child after
making our mistakes to become the person we were meant to be and still make
it to the final destination we all wish to see.
Good luck and keep writng
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you I will. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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No problem.
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Comment from Galactia
Hi
This I'd a great poem you have composed for the faith poetry contest. Lol how sweet. Just read your author notes. Nothing is more better then getting support from your wife, your biggest fan :)
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Hi
This I'd a great poem you have composed for the faith poetry contest. Lol how sweet. Just read your author notes. Nothing is more better then getting support from your wife, your biggest fan :)
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love it that your wife gave you six stars, that is the most important rating. You've gone through your life in this poem with all the changes that happen. We do all believe as children that we will go to Heaven. I think we are led to believe their is such a place you just walk into when you die. That is the simple innocent way of a child's thoughts. Later we test this theory, and it really does take a jolt to bring us back in line, and back to faith. Well done, this is an excellent contest entry. Good luck! : Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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I love it that your wife gave you six stars, that is the most important rating. You've gone through your life in this poem with all the changes that happen. We do all believe as children that we will go to Heaven. I think we are led to believe their is such a place you just walk into when you die. That is the simple innocent way of a child's thoughts. Later we test this theory, and it really does take a jolt to bring us back in line, and back to faith. Well done, this is an excellent contest entry. Good luck! : Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Yes, I got the sixer from the one who counts. Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we stare our own mortality in the face we start to change our attitude to life and value all those things we took for granted, and I am so glad your wife gave you six stars! He he he a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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When we stare our own mortality in the face we start to change our attitude to life and value all those things we took for granted, and I am so glad your wife gave you six stars! He he he a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Yes, I got the sixer from the one who counts.Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from b.anderson65
The rhyming of the poem flows, giving me a real interest in the poem. It was me and many others. The pace of it, made it easy to read and understand. I like the life journey presented.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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The rhyming of the poem flows, giving me a real interest in the poem. It was me and many others. The pace of it, made it easy to read and understand. I like the life journey presented.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Earl;
> Your heart is in it and it shows with the words in the increasing depth of your emotions to express yourself with such faith when confronted with mortality, But staying with home with your faith and your loved one and in Christ.
>You wrote this very beautifully in a free verse style piece of poetry.
>However you may want to attempt alliteration's, or maybe a metaphor or possibly a simile to enhance the flavor of your poetry. My answers to read much And to obtain just as much.
> Take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Cheers, Earl;
> Your heart is in it and it shows with the words in the increasing depth of your emotions to express yourself with such faith when confronted with mortality, But staying with home with your faith and your loved one and in Christ.
>You wrote this very beautifully in a free verse style piece of poetry.
>However you may want to attempt alliteration's, or maybe a metaphor or possibly a simile to enhance the flavor of your poetry. My answers to read much And to obtain just as much.
> Take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much for your advice and for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You very much, Earl, and take care and havve a good one.
Alx
Comment from countess gram
The poem flows very well and is easy to read. I like the easy rhyme and the recounting of your life. Good imagery makes for a pleasant read. Well done!! You definitely have a gift and should write poetry more often.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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The poem flows very well and is easy to read. I like the easy rhyme and the recounting of your life. Good imagery makes for a pleasant read. Well done!! You definitely have a gift and should write poetry more often.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thank you for your kind words, I've written a couple of poems and actually won a contest with one, the other was disqualified because I entered a rhyming poem in a Free Verse Contest LOL. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from meeshu
this is a wonderful spiritual faith poem, you will do well in the contest. your story is not unique which is why your write is important. it mirrors my story in many ways. your wife has a keen eye for talent, Earl.................meeshu
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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this is a wonderful spiritual faith poem, you will do well in the contest. your story is not unique which is why your write is important. it mirrors my story in many ways. your wife has a keen eye for talent, Earl.................meeshu
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thanks meeshu, I like to think I upgraded while she may have settled.. I appreciate your kind words and you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Faith not Fear", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Faith not Fear", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thank you very much. I am honored with the six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You're very welcome. Reading and reviewing your work was an absolute pleasure.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess