The Boat
A 5-7-5 poetry contest entry.214 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
this short poem could be taken in a lot of different directions for one's life and living. This was a well written poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and responding to... John
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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this short poem could be taken in a lot of different directions for one's life and living. This was a well written poetic voice that I enjoyed reading and responding to... John
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for your complements and you review.
Comment from Pili Pubul
Good question LOL did you found an answer? good and clever 5-7-5
A whole story expressed in few words that leave the reader wondering.
Thank you so much for sharing. Pili
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Good question LOL did you found an answer? good and clever 5-7-5
A whole story expressed in few words that leave the reader wondering.
Thank you so much for sharing. Pili
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it. :P and the excellent rating.
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You are very welcome. Pili
Comment from TKField
Pier, steer, here. You have rhymed these words. well done. This hi-coo thingy has hidden depths and I get the deeper meaning. Yes, life is a series of choices and we don't know if we've made the right one til it's all over and done with.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Pier, steer, here. You have rhymed these words. well done. This hi-coo thingy has hidden depths and I get the deeper meaning. Yes, life is a series of choices and we don't know if we've made the right one til it's all over and done with.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Yes, and thank you for your review and comments! :P
Comment from Bayberry
This is a thought-provoking entry. And that's something I like that a lot. The picture you've offered readers complements your words very well. --Janet
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This is a thought-provoking entry. And that's something I like that a lot. The picture you've offered readers complements your words very well. --Janet
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for your review and the five stars! :P It is much appreciated.
Comment from mauial
Good thought provoking poem in short form. I think we all go through that in life especially when we have no real spiritual guidance. That was true in my case until I was in my mid twenties. Since then I have learned to trust on a higher power to steer me.
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Good thought provoking poem in short form. I think we all go through that in life especially when we have no real spiritual guidance. That was true in my case until I was in my mid twenties. Since then I have learned to trust on a higher power to steer me.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Yes I have as well.
Comment from bkbehera
It is a highly impressive and anlytical work with enormous depth.It happens some time,even after reaching goal we think : "HOW DID I GET IT HERE"
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It is a highly impressive and anlytical work with enormous depth.It happens some time,even after reaching goal we think : "HOW DID I GET IT HERE"
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Yeah exactly! It makes me think about how I came to be noticed on here! :P I didnt know how my poem was going to be seen and now its on the all time best, its like how did i get here?
Comment from Gabriel06
Wow a lot of thought had to go into this great poem . It really is a good one , it is short but comes across as a very , very thought out , well written , piece .
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Wow a lot of thought had to go into this great poem . It really is a good one , it is short but comes across as a very , very thought out , well written , piece .
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for you complements. :P
Comment from Bill Schott
After reading this poem I have decided to go boating. I didn't have the least inclination to do so until now. You have changed my thought patterns. OKAY, that didn't happen. This was a nice five - seven - five that poses the question -- What now? I ask it daily.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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After reading this poem I have decided to go boating. I didn't have the least inclination to do so until now. You have changed my thought patterns. OKAY, that didn't happen. This was a nice five - seven - five that poses the question -- What now? I ask it daily.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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:P I wish I could be so convincing! :P I appreciate the funny review Bill
Comment from Harv
i like it because the second line, yet I know not how to steer--to me is very humble but more so accurate and blatantly true.
the first line brings intimidate vividness to the scene and the last line leaves me thinking very provoking great job.
blessings
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i like it because the second line, yet I know not how to steer--to me is very humble but more so accurate and blatantly true.
the first line brings intimidate vividness to the scene and the last line leaves me thinking very provoking great job.
blessings
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much harv for the six stars! :P very appreciated!
Comment from chasennov
'The Boat.' It most certainly is always open to the reader to decide what he does with certain work. Interpretation is the word. On the whole, not bad.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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'The Boat.' It most certainly is always open to the reader to decide what he does with certain work. Interpretation is the word. On the whole, not bad.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much for the review, I shall see about changing that.
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You are most welcome.