Thoughts Make A Billionaire?
Really? A Non-Fiction in 222 words.92 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
I think you wrote an interesting and original story. I don't think many expect to become a billionaire by marriage. I wondered if some of your grammar and punctuation was right.
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I think you wrote an interesting and original story. I don't think many expect to become a billionaire by marriage. I wondered if some of your grammar and punctuation was right.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Yes, I enjoy all your good writing and the truth, of course, but I don't see nothing wrong about a little bit of dream in this real hard time.
Good job Alcreator!
:)
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Yes, I enjoy all your good writing and the truth, of course, but I don't see nothing wrong about a little bit of dream in this real hard time.
Good job Alcreator!
:)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Righteous Riter
This piece holds much truth to it. You have to have a plan. A plan comes from thoughts. Then you must have the motivation and the commitment to carry out the plan. I like this. Thanks for sharing.
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This piece holds much truth to it. You have to have a plan. A plan comes from thoughts. Then you must have the motivation and the commitment to carry out the plan. I like this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I found this piece an interesting little read.
I'm country and an Aussie so wedding gifts ,well...anything goes.lol.
I enjoyed your sharing of thoughts and facts.
Take heart- for my latest poem was just a play around with words and technique but the reviewer found it very obscure.
he just couldn't find the meaning. Well, their really wasn't any. You can't please them all.
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I found this piece an interesting little read.
I'm country and an Aussie so wedding gifts ,well...anything goes.lol.
I enjoyed your sharing of thoughts and facts.
Take heart- for my latest poem was just a play around with words and technique but the reviewer found it very obscure.
he just couldn't find the meaning. Well, their really wasn't any. You can't please them all.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is very philosophical indeed. It reminds me of the dialogues of Plato, Critias and the Republic. These were dialogues, however there were long periods when only one spoke. This has the same feeling about it. It has so much truth in it as well. We need to believe that we can make that change in our lives. The power of belief and faith is not to be underestimated.
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This is very philosophical indeed. It reminds me of the dialogues of Plato, Critias and the Republic. These were dialogues, however there were long periods when only one spoke. This has the same feeling about it. It has so much truth in it as well. We need to believe that we can make that change in our lives. The power of belief and faith is not to be underestimated.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from cvcopac
I enjoyed reading this small story. I enjoyed the idea, syntax and the language. It makes a nice prologue for a larger story(s). Kenny
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I enjoyed reading this small story. I enjoyed the idea, syntax and the language. It makes a nice prologue for a larger story(s). Kenny
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Marvelous piece of Self Improvement Non Fiction in simple, but striking and sweetly hard wording!
It beautifully depicts the reveries of an idle minded, non industrious, parasitic person and then in the end drags him down to the real/ practical ground of life where only the coin of 'down to earth approach and sincere labor with full faith in God' works.
The most remarkable lines are: "....we never take cognizance.....change is permanent."
superb!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Marvelous piece of Self Improvement Non Fiction in simple, but striking and sweetly hard wording!
It beautifully depicts the reveries of an idle minded, non industrious, parasitic person and then in the end drags him down to the real/ practical ground of life where only the coin of 'down to earth approach and sincere labor with full faith in God' works.
The most remarkable lines are: "....we never take cognizance.....change is permanent."
superb!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from donaldww
Although we dream of success, nothig ever happens as expected. I've rarely come across anyone who wished for a fertilizer shop on their wedding day, although they may have been given some by their new relatives.
Cheers, DW
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Although we dream of success, nothig ever happens as expected. I've rarely come across anyone who wished for a fertilizer shop on their wedding day, although they may have been given some by their new relatives.
Cheers, DW
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from The Death
Hello
It is a wonderful write.
We always have a lot of thoughts and plans.we want this and that,we will like to have a lot of money,and every person has very different wishes,but they just become truth by speaking.these are only words and action or trying is required.
It is an excellent write.
Regards
Shar-A
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Hello
It is a wonderful write.
We always have a lot of thoughts and plans.we want this and that,we will like to have a lot of money,and every person has very different wishes,but they just become truth by speaking.these are only words and action or trying is required.
It is an excellent write.
Regards
Shar-A
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013
Comment from Titanx9
I think your message in this one is well received. Many people believe they are directing their destiny, only to be shown they have control over nothing. It is when we allow God to direct our steps, and help us make decisions that we have sustainability. Yes, man will go on planning and thinking he's in control, but there are some of us who know the truth. Excellent writing!
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I think your message in this one is well received. Many people believe they are directing their destiny, only to be shown they have control over nothing. It is when we allow God to direct our steps, and help us make decisions that we have sustainability. Yes, man will go on planning and thinking he's in control, but there are some of us who know the truth. Excellent writing!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2013