I Don't Know Why
A Non-Fiction in about 800 words.Why it happens.............88 total reviews
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is something really new and interesting for me. I enjoyed reading this prose, you certainly have an eclectic list of ambitions, some are really funny. I liked the style SO expressive and descriptive. Thanks, I just love it!
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This is something really new and interesting for me. I enjoyed reading this prose, you certainly have an eclectic list of ambitions, some are really funny. I liked the style SO expressive and descriptive. Thanks, I just love it!
:)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from judiverse
These are such wonderful dreams. You certainly cover a wide range of wishes for things you'd like to do and see. I like your beginnings with every day, etc. Limitations exist and reality sets in, so your last paragraph starting with "But I cannot" works fine. One of my favorites is the paragraph starting "Every evening I think I shall own..." is one of my favorites. You show the difference between the dream and reality by expressing desire to exercise, but also the fondness for international dishes. judi
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These are such wonderful dreams. You certainly cover a wide range of wishes for things you'd like to do and see. I like your beginnings with every day, etc. Limitations exist and reality sets in, so your last paragraph starting with "But I cannot" works fine. One of my favorites is the paragraph starting "Every evening I think I shall own..." is one of my favorites. You show the difference between the dream and reality by expressing desire to exercise, but also the fondness for international dishes. judi
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Cookie333
every day I wish to never end
Disappoints when it does
On Monday I wish my children happiness
On Tuesday they call me in tears
On Wednesday I pay all the bills
On Thursday my checkbook is overdrawn
On Friday I got a clean bill of health
On Saturday I took up smoking
Sunday is the day of rest, so I clean like a madwoman
This piece inspired lots of thoughts
What a great 'free write' inspiration
Thank you, I had a blast
K
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every day I wish to never end
Disappoints when it does
On Monday I wish my children happiness
On Tuesday they call me in tears
On Wednesday I pay all the bills
On Thursday my checkbook is overdrawn
On Friday I got a clean bill of health
On Saturday I took up smoking
Sunday is the day of rest, so I clean like a madwoman
This piece inspired lots of thoughts
What a great 'free write' inspiration
Thank you, I had a blast
K
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from cvcopac
Story of my life. You need to talk to my younger brother; he made it happen. Of all your great aspirations only two appealed to me as being worth-while: mixing freely with 60 beautiful women, and, a man who's never had a dog for a friend, knows nothing of love. Kenny
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Story of my life. You need to talk to my younger brother; he made it happen. Of all your great aspirations only two appealed to me as being worth-while: mixing freely with 60 beautiful women, and, a man who's never had a dog for a friend, knows nothing of love. Kenny
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Sanku
Because we are mere humans .there is a limit to our achievements .and the more you dream ,the less you perform for dreaming takes away a lot of energy .but i liked your write .most of us guiltyn of these dreams -well not to this extent .i always dreamt of being another lataji! and a neurophysicist!.but i spent most of my time cooking in the kitchen.
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Because we are mere humans .there is a limit to our achievements .and the more you dream ,the less you perform for dreaming takes away a lot of energy .but i liked your write .most of us guiltyn of these dreams -well not to this extent .i always dreamt of being another lataji! and a neurophysicist!.but i spent most of my time cooking in the kitchen.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer delivers a message that makes the reader stop and analyze their goals, missions and the things they want out of life. Every one has a purpose and finding that purpose is the number one priority. Sometimes our purpose is way different than how we dream it to be but not mine but thy will be done.
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The writer delivers a message that makes the reader stop and analyze their goals, missions and the things they want out of life. Every one has a purpose and finding that purpose is the number one priority. Sometimes our purpose is way different than how we dream it to be but not mine but thy will be done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is interesting in that we all have dreams of what we might do someday. In youth, that is. After a certain point in life, everyone realizes that "someday" never will come, and we've achieved all the goals we can. Dreaming and planning are fine, and even fun. But reality can't possibly match our dreams. We always must settle for less, and we must learn to be happy with what we DO accomplish in life. You did not include this, and pershaps it's because you aren't aware of it. You will be when you are old. :)
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This is interesting in that we all have dreams of what we might do someday. In youth, that is. After a certain point in life, everyone realizes that "someday" never will come, and we've achieved all the goals we can. Dreaming and planning are fine, and even fun. But reality can't possibly match our dreams. We always must settle for less, and we must learn to be happy with what we DO accomplish in life. You did not include this, and pershaps it's because you aren't aware of it. You will be when you are old. :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Jackarrie
wow I am exhausted after all that wishful thinking, and of coarse totally unrealistic, you would have absolutely no time for sleep, you may have to have a clone made of you to share in all this activity, even if it was to do your book signing. yes I know its fictional. but really i can go along with about a quarter of the hopes and wishes. we all have dreams,
A great dream now go back to sleep. Mary
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wow I am exhausted after all that wishful thinking, and of coarse totally unrealistic, you would have absolutely no time for sleep, you may have to have a clone made of you to share in all this activity, even if it was to do your book signing. yes I know its fictional. but really i can go along with about a quarter of the hopes and wishes. we all have dreams,
A great dream now go back to sleep. Mary
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
I enjoyed reading this prose, It was certainly different,and the imagerywas different. The style you wrote in was expressive and descriptive. Thanks and no need to change any of it. Mary
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I enjoyed reading this prose, It was certainly different,and the imagerywas different. The style you wrote in was expressive and descriptive. Thanks and no need to change any of it. Mary
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
Comment from Zue65
No matter how I look at it, this work of yours, is a self-improvement non-fiction, your message is a mouthful for us aspiring writers, I am new here, and I learned nuggets of wisdom, in every line the you have written in this article. I cannot afford to be selective, because all should be taken in to benefit from your piece. This a random musings of a writer like you with lessons to impart to us readers. Well done.
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No matter how I look at it, this work of yours, is a self-improvement non-fiction, your message is a mouthful for us aspiring writers, I am new here, and I learned nuggets of wisdom, in every line the you have written in this article. I cannot afford to be selective, because all should be taken in to benefit from your piece. This a random musings of a writer like you with lessons to impart to us readers. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013