All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Back and Forth"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Kingsland
I liked the way you chose to format this poem. It also has some good imagery in its phrases. This poem is written from your fond memories. It has very good flow and emotions written into its poetic voice. I enjoyed reading this well delivered piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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I liked the way you chose to format this poem. It also has some good imagery in its phrases. This poem is written from your fond memories. It has very good flow and emotions written into its poetic voice. I enjoyed reading this well delivered piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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thank you so much John - :) Sharyn
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I wanted so much to give you a six, and it won't let me! This is so beautiful, memories of a time gone by, it is lovely that we have them, it keeps our loved ones alive. This poem was a real pleasure to read! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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I wanted so much to give you a six, and it won't let me! This is so beautiful, memories of a time gone by, it is lovely that we have them, it keeps our loved ones alive. This poem was a real pleasure to read! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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A virtual will do it for me Sandra - I'm so glad you enjoy my stuff! :)S
Comment from robina1978
This is so beautiful. It surely deserves a six. You must have not fancied the gym and went rowing instead. There you met your father who is no more. I loved the structure and the subject. Consider it free style and such a beautiful memory of your father.
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This is so beautiful. It surely deserves a six. You must have not fancied the gym and went rowing instead. There you met your father who is no more. I loved the structure and the subject. Consider it free style and such a beautiful memory of your father.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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And bless you for your magic six on this one too, my dear - so much appreciated! :)Sharyn
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Sharyn so deserved. Just enjoy, Ine
Comment from Taffspride
Wow! When I started reading I did not expect such a loving tribute.
Your words carried me on that journey with you. I felt a pang of sadness at the bend.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Wow! When I started reading I did not expect such a loving tribute.
Your words carried me on that journey with you. I felt a pang of sadness at the bend.
Thank you for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Ann - I still remember him so vividly - and he's been gone almost 25 years now. :)Sharyn
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I understand how you feel Sharyn. My mother has been gone for almost 40, and I still remember her. It no longer saddens me when I think of her, because I know she is always with me. :)
Comment from Galactia
Beautiful poem reflecting life and paddling back in your mind when your father was alive and wishing your son had the chance to meet him, so touching
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Beautiful poem reflecting life and paddling back in your mind when your father was alive and wishing your son had the chance to meet him, so touching
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thx so much Tia! :)S
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend a beautiful memory inspired poem here so much feeling enclosed in the piece I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
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Hello my friend a beautiful memory inspired poem here so much feeling enclosed in the piece I enjoyed well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thx so much - again! Jill! :) S
Comment from Jendowoz
This sounds like either a lovely dream or a beautiful memory of your father, Sharyn. If it is a memory of a loved one passed, you couldn't have honoured it more. Well done.
Regards, Jen
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This sounds like either a lovely dream or a beautiful memory of your father, Sharyn. If it is a memory of a loved one passed, you couldn't have honoured it more. Well done.
Regards, Jen
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Bless you Jen - yes, my dad's been gone almost 25 years now ... still miss him. :)S
Comment from Deniz22
This is simply awesome;very touching as you are the link between the generations in your family. You seem so effortless and skilled in your writing. You are the glass hull cutting through the waters of time, swiftly, cleanly, propelled by the oars of your keen eyes, both inner and outer. The six should have gone to this but I saw the other first.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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This is simply awesome;very touching as you are the link between the generations in your family. You seem so effortless and skilled in your writing. You are the glass hull cutting through the waters of time, swiftly, cleanly, propelled by the oars of your keen eyes, both inner and outer. The six should have gone to this but I saw the other first.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Bless you Dennis! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. :)S
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
Perfect artwork. Oh, how I do love this great memory! What a way to spend the time at the gym. I was rowing right along with you on this fabulous river trip! Enjoyed, oh, so much!!
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Perfect artwork. Oh, how I do love this great memory! What a way to spend the time at the gym. I was rowing right along with you on this fabulous river trip! Enjoyed, oh, so much!!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Bless you my dear! :)S
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You are welcome, my friend! MN :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely poem. I like the way you start off in the gym and end up in remembering your father and a younger you rowing down the Brisbane River.Lovely too the way you have set out your words, as if they are as one with the oars.
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A lovely poem. I like the way you start off in the gym and end up in remembering your father and a younger you rowing down the Brisbane River.Lovely too the way you have set out your words, as if they are as one with the oars.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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thx so much Pearl! :)Sharyn