All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Not enough?"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from MaggieB50
I have read your work here before, and this piece is equally as awesome as your previous work I have read on this site. Your word choice is wonderful, evoking a strong emotional message. Another fantastic job! Blessings for continued success. Maggie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I have read your work here before, and this piece is equally as awesome as your previous work I have read on this site. Your word choice is wonderful, evoking a strong emotional message. Another fantastic job! Blessings for continued success. Maggie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thx so much Maggie! :)Sharyn
Comment from fayesh
Congrats on the win. I can relate to the conflict within between one's compassion and the reality of a society that is indifferent to the many who are in need of help. Sometimes, life is unfair and cold,and oftentimes, hopeless.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Congrats on the win. I can relate to the conflict within between one's compassion and the reality of a society that is indifferent to the many who are in need of help. Sometimes, life is unfair and cold,and oftentimes, hopeless.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thank you so much fayesh!
Best wishes,
sharyn
Comment from l.raven
And you so earned the win on this one Sharyn. There are so many out there now. I drive by. In the summer I carry bottled water and hand them water when I can. When I give them something I always feel I did the right thing no matter. But you are right there are far to many that need help. A wonderful write. Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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And you so earned the win on this one Sharyn. There are so many out there now. I drive by. In the summer I carry bottled water and hand them water when I can. When I give them something I always feel I did the right thing no matter. But you are right there are far to many that need help. A wonderful write. Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx so much, Linda! :)S
Comment from Glasstruth
Your writing is always a pleasure to read. Can relate to this. There was a homeless man by the library and slept outside even when the temperature went down to 10. Once I left a brown bag of food anonymously. Was sad to see him go one day. I got accustomed to see seeing him. He would clean up in the library. I suppose he went for better shelter. Your poem shows how we just avoid the situation, but you felt something and wrote this. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Your writing is always a pleasure to read. Can relate to this. There was a homeless man by the library and slept outside even when the temperature went down to 10. Once I left a brown bag of food anonymously. Was sad to see him go one day. I got accustomed to see seeing him. He would clean up in the library. I suppose he went for better shelter. Your poem shows how we just avoid the situation, but you felt something and wrote this. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx so much, Les! :)
Comment from cephira
Congrats on your contest win and ribbons! Wow, what a deeply honest and emotional scene you set with this one. Thanks for sharing and for the honesty. The emotion was certainly clear in the piece. Well deserved win. Best wishes.
Cephira
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Congrats on your contest win and ribbons! Wow, what a deeply honest and emotional scene you set with this one. Thanks for sharing and for the honesty. The emotion was certainly clear in the piece. Well deserved win. Best wishes.
Cephira
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx so much cephira! :)Sharyn
Comment from MumEsGirl
Brilliant work Sharyn
Sadly at some point we all have to become numb to some tragedies out there. Otherwise we would go crazy.
You have penned a thought provoking - my favorite word - poem that should make your readers stop and think
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Brilliant work Sharyn
Sadly at some point we all have to become numb to some tragedies out there. Otherwise we would go crazy.
You have penned a thought provoking - my favorite word - poem that should make your readers stop and think
hugs
kate
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Well bless you, Kate, for your lovely SIX! So much appreciated!
:)Sharyn
Comment from dylan49
Very nice entry, I enjoyed reading it very much. Hope to see more from you in the future I hope I can learn to write as good as this. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Very nice entry, I enjoyed reading it very much. Hope to see more from you in the future I hope I can learn to write as good as this. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx dylan! :)Sharyn
Comment from charlyann
Terrific job, clear and concise, smart and witty, a well done poem, I really like the look and feel of it, what a sad and unfair place this is for some...well done on this
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Terrific job, clear and concise, smart and witty, a well done poem, I really like the look and feel of it, what a sad and unfair place this is for some...well done on this
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx so much charlyann! :)
Comment from gazzagodbod
In our local news today there is a woman who invites the homeless men to stay in her house getting them off the streets she was in court today for over crowding and having stairs with no banister fined 7000pounds and told she will have to empty her house of all but 4 it's a mad world indeed xxgazzaxx
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In our local news today there is a woman who invites the homeless men to stay in her house getting them off the streets she was in court today for over crowding and having stairs with no banister fined 7000pounds and told she will have to empty her house of all but 4 it's a mad world indeed xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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aaah, yes, our local tax dollars hard at work, gazza! why does this not surprise me?
Comment from AprilShower
Visionary, the way I look at, if I were to give to every organization or person who asks for or wants money, I would end up standing out there with that sign. Yes. Sometimes we have to blank it all out to survive ourselves. It's a either or situation.
I could feel the exasperation expressed in this free style poem. Well done.
April
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Visionary, the way I look at, if I were to give to every organization or person who asks for or wants money, I would end up standing out there with that sign. Yes. Sometimes we have to blank it all out to survive ourselves. It's a either or situation.
I could feel the exasperation expressed in this free style poem. Well done.
April
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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thx April! :)S