All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Just for Me"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Glasstruth
What a fun, delicious poem. From Tarzania to Windsor Castle and to the shores of Hawaii you have sm¶rg¥sbord of yummy love treats. For Valentine's day your chocolate-covered love sounds like a heavy conteder for the contest. Sorry, my sixes have been spent. Superb! Les
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What a fun, delicious poem. From Tarzania to Windsor Castle and to the shores of Hawaii you have sm¶rg¥sbord of yummy love treats. For Valentine's day your chocolate-covered love sounds like a heavy conteder for the contest. Sorry, my sixes have been spent. Superb! Les
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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No expense spared, Les! Glad you enjoyed :)Sharyn
Comment from Black_Oxygen
baking
creaming
browning
dreaming
till I've discovered
the alchemy of perfect chocolate-covered love ...
just for you, my sweet
This is beautiful Love Poetry. It flows nicely and
raises warm emotions from the reader. Thank You
for your creation.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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baking
creaming
browning
dreaming
till I've discovered
the alchemy of perfect chocolate-covered love ...
just for you, my sweet
This is beautiful Love Poetry. It flows nicely and
raises warm emotions from the reader. Thank You
for your creation.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much B.O. - to a fellow romantic! :)))Sharyn
Comment from Janet Foor
Oh, Sharyn this is heavenly. Next weekend, I'm going to a Chocolate Festival. While I'm enjoying all the luscious and velvety treats as they linger on my tongue.
I will be remembering the
perfect chocolate-covered love ...
Bring on the chocolate!
Janet :-)
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Oh, Sharyn this is heavenly. Next weekend, I'm going to a Chocolate Festival. While I'm enjoying all the luscious and velvety treats as they linger on my tongue.
I will be remembering the
perfect chocolate-covered love ...
Bring on the chocolate!
Janet :-)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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nothing quite like it, is there Janet? :))))) Sharyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Darn it Sharyn I think just reading this I gained two pounds on my butt!! Still this is a delight to read aloud for sure. And your a pro at wit and charming yet powerful message.
Guess I must now go and work off those pounds. Bring on the firefighters. Actually I haven't found any...but cute cowboy Casanovas :)
Exceptional work this is worthy of a six plus.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Darn it Sharyn I think just reading this I gained two pounds on my butt!! Still this is a delight to read aloud for sure. And your a pro at wit and charming yet powerful message.
Guess I must now go and work off those pounds. Bring on the firefighters. Actually I haven't found any...but cute cowboy Casanovas :)
Exceptional work this is worthy of a six plus.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Lovely! A six from you is worth all that chocolate, Maureen ... I'm going on a diet today anyway, right? (And forget firefighters, though they're cute ... cowboys too ... I've discovered cute surfer dudes!)
Seriously, bless you for your appreciation and for that lovely six, Maureen! How are YOU doing?
:)Sharyn
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Still in vacation mode, doing absolutely nothing....and loving it. Oh yeah the surfer dudes .....yup definitely a great idea for the dark sunglasses:) you can look to your hearts content.....LOL
xx
Comment from ravenblack
crud. I wrote a long review and lost it when I fanned you. Anyway, great piece - it is clear that you have a love of language and back that with the knowledge/instinct of how to use words. exotic words mixed in add zest and spice. great rhythm and playfulness throughout.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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crud. I wrote a long review and lost it when I fanned you. Anyway, great piece - it is clear that you have a love of language and back that with the knowledge/instinct of how to use words. exotic words mixed in add zest and spice. great rhythm and playfulness throughout.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much rb - just return fanned you - LOVE it when someone understands poetry as something to be read & performed, not just cerebrally absorbed.
Blessings,
Sharyn
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thank you. don't know where you are from, but if it is in the northwest suburbs of Chicago, come join our reading. info is on my profile
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Unfortunately that's rather a long way to go my dear - I live in Hawaii! :)))) But thx for the invite, and if ever I'm over there ...
Comment from Gungalo
as
you
lie
in
delicious
wanton wait
swathed
in
red swirls
of Valentine velvet ...
just
for
me
You certainly have traveled the world over to see to it that his every need is met. I wonder if he will appreciate it and return the favor? I loved seeing where you went and the tricks you used to obtain your goal. Sigh, oh well, it's only once a year. Why not?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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as
you
lie
in
delicious
wanton wait
swathed
in
red swirls
of Valentine velvet ...
just
for
me
You certainly have traveled the world over to see to it that his every need is met. I wonder if he will appreciate it and return the favor? I loved seeing where you went and the tricks you used to obtain your goal. Sigh, oh well, it's only once a year. Why not?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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If not, I'll send him to Tasmania as punishment - it's where my mother lives!!!
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Oh boy!!!! LOL
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a fate worse than death!
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LOL sure sure.
Comment from mountainwriter49
Good Morning, Sharyn
I enjoyed your poem about what you're willing
to do for the one you love. Your examples are
fun, well presented and made me smile and
laugh at times. Good luck at getting the roses
from the Queen's garden!
A wonderful poem! thanks for sharing
Ray
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2013
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Good Morning, Sharyn
I enjoyed your poem about what you're willing
to do for the one you love. Your examples are
fun, well presented and made me smile and
laugh at times. Good luck at getting the roses
from the Queen's garden!
A wonderful poem! thanks for sharing
Ray
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much, Ray! :)S
Comment from fairy77
WoW! Very impressive and Im sure youll do well in the contest. I loved your references to nature and found it quite amusing. Hats off to you girl. Yes I know theres spags in this they gave me a keyboard with 3 mistakes. beth fairy77.
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WoW! Very impressive and Im sure youll do well in the contest. I loved your references to nature and found it quite amusing. Hats off to you girl. Yes I know theres spags in this they gave me a keyboard with 3 mistakes. beth fairy77.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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thx so much Beth - somehow I managed to slip up (or the edit program did!) and it didn't get into the contest, would you believe? I'll probably have to write something ELSE, DAMMIT! :)s
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Good luck in the next contest:) Beth fairy77.
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aaah - I got lazy - Tom fixed it for me. Enough of Valentine's already - I want to try my hand at the Unexpected Romance short story - deadline in a couple of days and I don't have a frigging CLUE yet! fingers crossed! :))) all ideas welcome!!!
Comment from muezza56
this poem provides the reader with a tasty treat, and the beautiful imagery adds to the flavour and richness of both the poem and the poet(they have to be rich to afford all this travelling!) if possible i would also award this poem with 5 yum yum stars!
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this poem provides the reader with a tasty treat, and the beautiful imagery adds to the flavour and richness of both the poem and the poet(they have to be rich to afford all this travelling!) if possible i would also award this poem with 5 yum yum stars!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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THX SO MUCH MUEZZA! :)sharyn
Comment from charlyann
Very nice I enjoyed this...the changing structure and the flow...I love the "the world giddy...good job...thanks for sharing
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Very nice I enjoyed this...the changing structure and the flow...I love the "the world giddy...good job...thanks for sharing
Comment Written 27-Jan-2013
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thx charlyann! :)Sharyn