All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Soul's Voice"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from ernesto escarro
Coming Home
Nooner one ever know what wonder of life is hanging aroung,
Waiting with alive expectation for the one that pass
before yore time come ahead of you will meet you back at home.
For the house is not a home. But it isd full of love and care to the fresh living who separated from your side.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Coming Home
Nooner one ever know what wonder of life is hanging aroung,
Waiting with alive expectation for the one that pass
before yore time come ahead of you will meet you back at home.
For the house is not a home. But it isd full of love and care to the fresh living who separated from your side.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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thx so much e.e.! :) Sharyn
Comment from Chris Tee
Yes this is an absolutely well penned piece of poetry that we have here.
It is an excellent entry in the contest here and good luck in the contest.
Well done indeed.
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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Yes this is an absolutely well penned piece of poetry that we have here.
It is an excellent entry in the contest here and good luck in the contest.
Well done indeed.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
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thx Chris!