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Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "i share myself"keep your hope alive....
73 total reviews
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Evocative words that well describe the very private and personal process that the introverted writer goes through to express his or her truth. I resonates with me.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Evocative words that well describe the very private and personal process that the introverted writer goes through to express his or her truth. I resonates with me.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you nancy :)
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:-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A well written nonet with good syllable count, topic, and shape.
-Effective imagery reflects your self description.
-I like the opening two lines that state the premise.
-I also like the ending lines with "ink bled."
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest, shelley.
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-A well written nonet with good syllable count, topic, and shape.
-Effective imagery reflects your self description.
-I like the opening two lines that state the premise.
-I also like the ending lines with "ink bled."
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest, shelley.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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thank you pam :-)
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You are welcome, shelley.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
a very nice nonet poem. We do express ourselves in many ways when we write. Sometimes privacy is needed; in other words, the world does not need to know what we write.
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a very nice nonet poem. We do express ourselves in many ways when we write. Sometimes privacy is needed; in other words, the world does not need to know what we write.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you rosemary :)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, clear, meaningful and creative. The poem states clearly how it is possible to express oneself even if your
shy, an introvert or quiet. The poem flows and connects well and it
also meets the guideslines this Nonet Contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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The author's words are engaging, clear, meaningful and creative. The poem states clearly how it is possible to express oneself even if your
shy, an introvert or quiet. The poem flows and connects well and it
also meets the guideslines this Nonet Contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you harmony :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your nonet contest entry is in great form, Shelley. I enjoyed reading it. The completed work has a great 'nonet' shape. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words are well thought out and give readers more insight into YOU.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your nonet contest entry is in great form, Shelley. I enjoyed reading it. The completed work has a great 'nonet' shape. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words are well thought out and give readers more insight into YOU.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you jan :-)
Comment from Gee
Nicely done nonet.
I see this is for a contest. I hope you do well.
I know it is difficult to keep bringing down the syllables.
Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
And Good Luck
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Nicely done nonet.
I see this is for a contest. I hope you do well.
I know it is difficult to keep bringing down the syllables.
Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
And Good Luck
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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i hope i do too LOL thank you 'g' :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I believe that poets put themselves out there more than prose writers. Poets' poems are filled with emotion that must come from the heart. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I believe that poets put themselves out there more than prose writers. Poets' poems are filled with emotion that must come from the heart. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you barbara :-)
Comment from Frank Malley
As complex in communicative style as people are, any attempt at comprehensive awareness of what the differences of personality include requires hearing from those who are shy, reserved, and reclusive - for whatever reasons. Shelley kaye (hopefully her name commemorates the great Percy Bysshe Shelley) has written a nonet poem that serves as a preface to all she may write as the expressions of someone who otherwise would be unknowable. Many great poets, especially women, have escaped the confinements of eccentric social systems to reveal themselves in ink, on paper.
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As complex in communicative style as people are, any attempt at comprehensive awareness of what the differences of personality include requires hearing from those who are shy, reserved, and reclusive - for whatever reasons. Shelley kaye (hopefully her name commemorates the great Percy Bysshe Shelley) has written a nonet poem that serves as a preface to all she may write as the expressions of someone who otherwise would be unknowable. Many great poets, especially women, have escaped the confinements of eccentric social systems to reveal themselves in ink, on paper.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you frank :-)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very clever. Bravo. A standing ovation you cannot see. Nice piece and thanks for submitting. Hope you get a ton of votes. (I still don't see how more apllauds are needed, do you?) 150 characters now met.
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Very clever. Bravo. A standing ovation you cannot see. Nice piece and thanks for submitting. Hope you get a ton of votes. (I still don't see how more apllauds are needed, do you?) 150 characters now met.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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LOL! you're funny, tom. i like your sense of humour :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good money. You aren't the only one who finds it easier to express yourself in writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Dragonpoet
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This is a good money. You aren't the only one who finds it easier to express yourself in writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
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thank you dragon :-)