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Home is where your life unfolds.89 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very enjoyable poem about home. So many memories, that stay with us even when we find ourselves alone. I like the part:
"until the grandchildren arrive
and put dirty shoes on your furniture
jelly handprints on the walls
but have the best hugs for grandma"
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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A very enjoyable poem about home. So many memories, that stay with us even when we find ourselves alone. I like the part:
"until the grandchildren arrive
and put dirty shoes on your furniture
jelly handprints on the walls
but have the best hugs for grandma"
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Life can be beautiful. Thank you, Anne, for reading and commenting. Linda
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You are very welcome, Linda
Comment from Sole Searcher
It' so beautiful. Warmed my heart as I read the piece. And living outside my own country for almost two decades, I miss home everyday. It made me a little sad but made me smile too with how true every word you wrote. Home is where the heart is. I love it. Very well written. Thank you so much. (Calling my mom right now). :)
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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It' so beautiful. Warmed my heart as I read the piece. And living outside my own country for almost two decades, I miss home everyday. It made me a little sad but made me smile too with how true every word you wrote. Home is where the heart is. I love it. Very well written. Thank you so much. (Calling my mom right now). :)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Sole Searcher: tell your mom I said, "Hello"! So happy this poem moved you. Linda
Comment from Leann DS
Very nice poem! I really enjoyed it, and also can relate to the topic.
I think you may have forgotten to delete a line... You said, regarding the limo, both the sentence about the prom and the wedding. I think you only meant to leave in one of those. But if not, I don't understand it. Ha!
In any event, I like your poem. I especially like the way you ended it. Hugs.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Very nice poem! I really enjoyed it, and also can relate to the topic.
I think you may have forgotten to delete a line... You said, regarding the limo, both the sentence about the prom and the wedding. I think you only meant to leave in one of those. But if not, I don't understand it. Ha!
In any event, I like your poem. I especially like the way you ended it. Hugs.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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No mistake. After the daughter goes to the prom, then comes a wedding. How old are you?? Thank for reading. LOL Linda
Comment from DonandVicki
I especially liked your first and last stanzas. "Home is where you find your umbrella..." and "When there is no place else to go..." We are faced with a lot of storms lately; riots, political nonsense. I need to get my umbrella to protect me from the S**t storms.
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I especially liked your first and last stanzas. "Home is where you find your umbrella..." and "When there is no place else to go..." We are faced with a lot of storms lately; riots, political nonsense. I need to get my umbrella to protect me from the S**t storms.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Totally agree. Thank for reading and for six stars. Linda
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
"Home is where your life unfolds." I love that, even though it's it's obvious, I never thought of it in quite that way! I really enjoyed this story of a life in the context of home, nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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"Home is where your life unfolds." I love that, even though it's it's obvious, I never thought of it in quite that way! I really enjoyed this story of a life in the context of home, nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
Your words are so true
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you for sharing this heart felted poem
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
Your words are so true
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Cookie. Linda
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from Janice Canerdy
So glad I have a 6 for this masterpiece that made he cry--and smile. I am
moved by your specific descriptions, how they take the reader full circle
in that place called home.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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So glad I have a 6 for this masterpiece that made he cry--and smile. I am
moved by your specific descriptions, how they take the reader full circle
in that place called home.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Janice, for reading and for six stars. Linda
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
LivelyLinda:
Yes, home is all the things you mentioned above - and more.
And when all is said and done, and we are at the end of our
road, the one thing left to do is to go home. Thanks for
sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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LivelyLinda:
Yes, home is all the things you mentioned above - and more.
And when all is said and done, and we are at the end of our
road, the one thing left to do is to go home. Thanks for
sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you, mom. Linda
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a very well written poem about home is one's life time shelter place where one goes from young age to retirement age.
I like the following sentence: "home is the place that feels so empty . . . until the grandchildren arrive, and put dirty shoes on your furniture jelly handprints on the walls but have the best hugs for grandma."
I miss seeing my grandchildren in person...
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is a very well written poem about home is one's life time shelter place where one goes from young age to retirement age.
I like the following sentence: "home is the place that feels so empty . . . until the grandchildren arrive, and put dirty shoes on your furniture jelly handprints on the walls but have the best hugs for grandma."
I miss seeing my grandchildren in person...
Happy writing.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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I'm so happy that this poem got your heart. Linda
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting free verse poem, one in which you conjure up many different images of the coziness that we associate with our homes. The picture is a great touch.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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This is an interesting free verse poem, one in which you conjure up many different images of the coziness that we associate with our homes. The picture is a great touch.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Susan. Linda