Faces of the City
A make believe essay.52 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I live in Australia, but my daughter, husband a grandsons lived there until recently, so every year we visited them in Upper Manhattan for the 4 and 1/2 years they were there! I have seen and stood on that very spot the near naked man with the guitar is standing, however on the underground there weren't any conducters, but there would have been 37 years ago! I enjoyed your well written, readably composed essay and really enjoyed it, and relate to everything you say, our second home, I may never visit again, but the sights, sound and "aromas" I will never forget! Well done, blessings, Roy, no spags found.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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I live in Australia, but my daughter, husband a grandsons lived there until recently, so every year we visited them in Upper Manhattan for the 4 and 1/2 years they were there! I have seen and stood on that very spot the near naked man with the guitar is standing, however on the underground there weren't any conducters, but there would have been 37 years ago! I enjoyed your well written, readably composed essay and really enjoyed it, and relate to everything you say, our second home, I may never visit again, but the sights, sound and "aromas" I will never forget! Well done, blessings, Roy, no spags found.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Thank you so much, Roy, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. Also, thank you for bringing a paragraph that needs work to my attention. The ride in from Rockville Center, with the conductors, was on the train. I will try to clarify that with future readers. Thanks again, Ric.
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Most welcome Ric.
Comment from Ben Colder
Wish I had a six for this one. Well done, author. You described New York to a T. Been there , done that. Years ago 1963 -64 , the Worlds Fair . Good job Ric.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Wish I had a six for this one. Well done, author. You described New York to a T. Been there , done that. Years ago 1963 -64 , the Worlds Fair . Good job Ric.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Ben, my friend, I can't thank you enough for taking time to read and comment on my essay. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. Thanks again, Ric.