His love..
Melts hearts of stone.106 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Very religious and faith filled poem. It succinctly tells the story of the life and death of Jesus and what the death brought. Good use of Bible versees.
Good choice of illustration.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Very religious and faith filled poem. It succinctly tells the story of the life and death of Jesus and what the death brought. Good use of Bible versees.
Good choice of illustration.
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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Any time, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Bryan G
This is a wonderful poem about the love of Jesus. Your poem takes me back to the hymn that says, "Isn't the love of Jesus something wonderful?" It is indeed amazing to think that God could love us.
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This is a wonderful poem about the love of Jesus. Your poem takes me back to the hymn that says, "Isn't the love of Jesus something wonderful?" It is indeed amazing to think that God could love us.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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It is indeed Bryan, thank your for this kind, very generous review and expansive comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Roy - Another poem from you that reinforces what we already know. That you have great faith in God. It is written in good rhyming couplets throughout. Pity about 'This Jesus died upon that tree' - even the heathens among us know it is a cross. Besides dying on a tree is too near the truth about Judas Iscariot. This is such a good poem I would be inclined to make a following line that rhymes with 'cross'. Otherwise well written as is usual with you. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Hi Roy - Another poem from you that reinforces what we already know. That you have great faith in God. It is written in good rhyming couplets throughout. Pity about 'This Jesus died upon that tree' - even the heathens among us know it is a cross. Besides dying on a tree is too near the truth about Judas Iscariot. This is such a good poem I would be inclined to make a following line that rhymes with 'cross'. Otherwise well written as is usual with you. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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1 Peter 2:24, says it's a tree, it's a common metaphor! A great word for rhyme! Thank you Dorothy I really am most grateful for your ongoing support, thanks for the lovely, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely poem of faith, with an appropriate joyful rhythm. I especially like this line:
His light reveals the path you seek.
like heaven's twins, << Should be a capital letter on Heaven, to distinguish it as the name of a specific place and not just the sky above.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Lovely poem of faith, with an appropriate joyful rhythm. I especially like this line:
His light reveals the path you seek.
like heaven's twins, << Should be a capital letter on Heaven, to distinguish it as the name of a specific place and not just the sky above.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you Phyllis I keep forgetting and you keep telling me, thank you my friend for the lovely review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well done, Roy! Thank you for a piece of work that is inspiring and uplifting and renews my faith. The love of God and our love for each other can overcome the present strife around the world I'm sure, Giddy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Well done, Roy! Thank you for a piece of work that is inspiring and uplifting and renews my faith. The love of God and our love for each other can overcome the present strife around the world I'm sure, Giddy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you Giddy, for the lovely comments and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Caressa_08
I really like your poem in tribute to Jesus & what his love for us can do..And the quotations listed..Did have a little problem understanding the last stanza..Oh, by the way, unrelated here.. I have twin sons, now soon to be 37.
Caressa
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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I really like your poem in tribute to Jesus & what his love for us can do..And the quotations listed..Did have a little problem understanding the last stanza..Oh, by the way, unrelated here.. I have twin sons, now soon to be 37.
Caressa
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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The scriptures say that Christ is in us and we are in Him, whereas the only humans that are conjoined are Siamese twins, a Christian and Christ are even closer, and He calls me brother, hence Kin! I could get the scriptures if you wish, Caressa, very comforting being like this, it answers all questions,thanks for the great review, blessings, Roy.
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Thanks for your explanation, I understand clearly now....C.
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You're most welcome Caressa, Roy.
Comment from Leineco
True to your faith and beliefs, you have written a glowing ode to God's/Jesus' love with excellent meter and couplet style rhyme scheme :-)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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True to your faith and beliefs, you have written a glowing ode to God's/Jesus' love with excellent meter and couplet style rhyme scheme :-)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank,you so much for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from TELLER OF TALES
The rhyme on this most beautiful and perfect piece by the author are incredible, I love the words they are so strong they can be felt deep inside the heart and soul of this reader, I have read flyers, beautiful flyers but this one should be preserved for ever in a plaque, truly god leads this author. thank you for sharing it with this reader.. TELLER OF TALES..
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The rhyme on this most beautiful and perfect piece by the author are incredible, I love the words they are so strong they can be felt deep inside the heart and soul of this reader, I have read flyers, beautiful flyers but this one should be preserved for ever in a plaque, truly god leads this author. thank you for sharing it with this reader.. TELLER OF TALES..
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you for this most magnanimous review, comments and kindness, blessings, Roy.
Comment from linsbm
God's love is the only one that survives every one, and there is no other great love than from Him. We are all thankful.
You did a wonderful job in writing this beautiful poem about God's love. Everyone will cheer you and be thankful. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
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God's love is the only one that survives every one, and there is no other great love than from Him. We are all thankful.
You did a wonderful job in writing this beautiful poem about God's love. Everyone will cheer you and be thankful. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you Lin for this most lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.
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You are most welcome. God bless.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, royowen, you did an excellent job writing this sonnet like poem about the new name that we have in Christ. I enjoyyd reading it and love the picture
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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this is an excellent write, royowen, you did an excellent job writing this sonnet like poem about the new name that we have in Christ. I enjoyyd reading it and love the picture
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review, blessings, Roy